Reviews for Last Call |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Wow, me encantó esta historia. Creo que la empecé a leer hace algún tiempo pero no estaba terminada. Y me pone muy contante que hayas terminado la historia. Y que haya tantas tomas extras. Gracias por la historia me gustó mucho. Saludos de mi lindo Ecuador. Adriu |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your works! I don’t know how I missed reading this one. I’m so geeked about this story. I hope that Edward can fill in some blanks for Bella. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I’m really interested in finding out how he knew her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() When I read this story years ago, I was so caught up in the angst. I had such a hard time getting passed Edwards 60 hour sexing with tori to being in Bella’s bed a week after. I hated that Bella had only ever been with Edward. That trope usually drives me nuts. But earlier yesterday this fic popped into my head and I came back to do a re read, and just, it had me smiling, a lot. I hate what Bella went through. I hate it so much. All of it. Her teenage self never had a chance. I hate that everyone around her broke her heart. I feel for Edward. He loved a girl he couldn’t have, so he turned those emotions off and moved on. And I hate that he moved on- most likely slept around (another trope that I usually dislike- Edward sleeping around and basically virgin Bella. Oh well) got engaged. But I get it. I do wish he had broken up with tori bc he didn’t want her anymore, not bc of the California thing. But, his love for Bella was just so pure. It left me with a smile on my face over and over again. Despite all of the pain, heart ache, things out of their control, and horrible decisions, they ended up back together. I am glad that Bella wasn’t ever intimidated by his relationship with tori- bc I think I would have struggled there… he jumped from tori to Bella so fast, it would have felt like whiplash and not knowing what was true and what wasn’t. But Edward was there for her, and that was enough for her. Thank you for this beautiful and heart breaking story. And thank you for mending their hearts |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a sad time for a lot of people. Loved this story. It was so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who knew cooking lessons could be so much fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love reading about all the babies everyone has! How crazy that Bella was so far along and didn't know it. I'm bet that happens more than we know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can only imagine Edward with his baby Cora. Sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, that was a perfect proposal! Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Royce sure was lowdown. At least Bella knows now that being forced into marriage with Alec wasn't because of her dad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's sad that Edward and Bella lost so much time together but they are together now. I wonder what Royce will have to say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, Bella's mom was an awful person! So sad for Edward and Bella, but at least they are back together now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Edward is a follow through kind of guy! Lucky Bella! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Making new memories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's sad that they had to separate. |