|Reviews for Last Call|
| Adriu chapter 38 . 1/21
Wow, me encantó esta historia. Creo que la empecé a leer hace algún tiempo pero no estaba terminada. Y me pone muy contante que hayas terminado la historia. Y que haya tantas tomas extras.
Gracias por la historia me gustó mucho.
Saludos de mi lindo Ecuador.
| sue1zide chapter 4 . 8/6/2022
I love your works! I don’t know how I missed reading this one. I’m so geeked about this story.
I hope that Edward can fill in some blanks for Bella.
| sue1zide chapter 2 . 8/5/2022
Well, I’m really interested in finding out how he knew her.
| DMBSJB18 chapter 35 . 7/1/2022
When I read this story years ago, I was so caught up in the angst. I had such a hard time getting passed Edwards 60 hour sexing with tori to being in Bella’s bed a week after. I hated that Bella had only ever been with Edward. That trope usually drives me nuts.
But earlier yesterday this fic popped into my head and I came back to do a re read, and just, it had me smiling, a lot. I hate what Bella went through. I hate it so much. All of it. Her teenage self never had a chance. I hate that everyone around her broke her heart.
I feel for Edward. He loved a girl he couldn’t have, so he turned those emotions off and moved on. And I hate that he moved on- most likely slept around (another trope that I usually dislike- Edward sleeping around and basically virgin Bella. Oh well) got engaged. But I get it. I do wish he had broken up with tori bc he didn’t want her anymore, not bc of the California thing. But, his love for Bella was just so pure. It left me with a smile on my face over and over again. Despite all of the pain, heart ache, things out of their control, and horrible decisions, they ended up back together. I am glad that Bella wasn’t ever intimidated by his relationship with tori- bc I think I would have struggled there… he jumped from tori to Bella so fast, it would have felt like whiplash and not knowing what was true and what wasn’t. But Edward was there for her, and that was enough for her.
Thank you for this beautiful and heart breaking story. And thank you for mending their hearts
| cctwilight chapter 38 . 4/29/2022
That was a sad time for a lot of people. Loved this story. It was so good!
| cctwilight chapter 37 . 4/29/2022
Who knew cooking lessons could be so much fun!
| cctwilight chapter 36 . 4/26/2022
Love reading about all the babies everyone has! How crazy that Bella was so far along and didn't know it. I'm bet that happens more than we know.
| cctwilight chapter 35 . 4/25/2022
I can only imagine Edward with his baby Cora. Sweet!
| cctwilight chapter 34 . 4/25/2022
Aww, that was a perfect proposal! Loved it!
| cctwilight chapter 33 . 4/25/2022
Royce sure was lowdown. At least Bella knows now that being forced into marriage with Alec wasn't because of her dad.
| cctwilight chapter 32 . 4/25/2022
It's sad that Edward and Bella lost so much time together but they are together now. I wonder what Royce will have to say.
| cctwilight chapter 31 . 4/20/2022
Wow, Bella's mom was an awful person! So sad for Edward and Bella, but at least they are back together now.
| cctwilight chapter 30 . 4/20/2022
Edward is a follow through kind of guy! Lucky Bella!
| cctwilight chapter 27 . 4/15/2022
Making new memories!
| cctwilight chapter 26 . 4/14/2022
It's sad that they had to separate.