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Reread

Yesss! Tori is going to be so embarrased.

What s friggin b

Tori is selfish and has changed while away.

That chapter was fantastic!

Love stories thst involve memory loss!

Awwww. I LOVED THIS! I kept waiting for all her memories to come back but I'm glad that's not how it happened. They built something new and it was beautiful.
Thanks for sharing!

Edwaaard, break up with her, please!

Tori sounds like a b*tch. Wait - Tori IS a b*tch.

I think I've read this story, parts of it were very familiar. However, it/s still a great story. Glad james was given a good guy role for once. Thanks for writing and shraaing

Hey!
Wow, me encantó esta historia. Creo que la empecé a leer hace algún tiempo pero no estaba terminada. Y me pone muy contante que hayas terminado la historia. Y que haya tantas tomas extras.
Gracias por la historia me gustó mucho.
Saludos de mi lindo Ecuador.
Adriu

I love your works! I don’t know how I missed reading this one. I’m so geeked about this story.
I hope that Edward can fill in some blanks for Bella.

Well, I’m really interested in finding out how he knew her.

When I read this story years ago, I was so caught up in the angst. I had such a hard time getting passed Edwards 60 hour sexing with tori to being in Bella’s bed a week after. I hated that Bella had only ever been with Edward. That trope usually drives me nuts.

But earlier yesterday this fic popped into my head and I came back to do a re read, and just, it had me smiling, a lot. I hate what Bella went through. I hate it so much. All of it. Her teenage self never had a chance. I hate that everyone around her broke her heart.
I feel for Edward. He loved a girl he couldn’t have, so he turned those emotions off and moved on. And I hate that he moved on- most likely slept around (another trope that I usually dislike- Edward sleeping around and basically virgin Bella. Oh well) got engaged. But I get it. I do wish he had broken up with tori bc he didn’t want her anymore, not bc of the California thing. But, his love for Bella was just so pure. It left me with a smile on my face over and over again. Despite all of the pain, heart ache, things out of their control, and horrible decisions, they ended up back together. I am glad that Bella wasn’t ever intimidated by his relationship with tori- bc I think I would have struggled there… he jumped from tori to Bella so fast, it would have felt like whiplash and not knowing what was true and what wasn’t. But Edward was there for her, and that was enough for her.
Thank you for this beautiful and heart breaking story. And thank you for mending their hearts