Reviews for Last Call
frlarsson chapter 9 . 1/20/2012
Love the chapter, the progress and their confusion ) and Of Course they have someone by the name of Eric working there LOL wonder how this CF will evolve.. .

best wishes, Linda xo
frlarsson chapter 8 . 1/20/2012
Love the chapter and the progress, wonder what James is up to with his "Eric" talk.. .

best wishes, Linda xo
frlarsson chapter 7 . 1/20/2012
Love the chapter and the progress, ) looking forward to the bumpy ride,

best wishes, Linda xo
frlarsson chapter 6 . 1/20/2012
Love the chapter and the progress, ) cant wait to see how Edwardll react to his new employee D

best wishes, Linda xo
frlarsson chapter 5 . 1/20/2012
Love the chapter and the progress, )

best wishes, Linda
frlarsson chapter 4 . 1/20/2012
Love the chapter, ) the progress and Edwards POV,

best wishes, Linda xo
frlarsson chapter 3 . 1/20/2012
Love the chapter and the progress, )

best wishes, Linda xo
frlarsson chapter 2 . 1/20/2012
Wow, that was some heated feelings, there )

Love the first chapter,

best wishes, Linda
frlarsson chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
Love the prologue,

best wishes, Linda
bon123 chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
i'm definitely hooked. good story. goood writing. please keep going .thank you.
KG112 chapter 10 . 1/19/2012
Great story! I'm a Jersey girl so its great reading about places you can relate too. I can't wait to see whats gonna happen next!
danaelise chapter 10 . 1/19/2012
Okay- I just started reading this story because it was rec'd by carano, and I have got to tell you how much I love it! I am seriously so freaking hooked already. Cannot wait for the next update. Your Edward has me laughing out loud. My two year old keeps wanting to know what's so funny on mommy's iPad. I can't believe this is your first attempt at a story. For real. It's great. And as a fellow twimom I've gotta say that I am very impressed with your cake baking endeavor. ;-). My son forces me to watch hours of Yo Gabba Gabba daily, so I am well acquainted with that freaking moose & owl. Anyway, love love love the story! Thank you for sharing it with us.
allidel chapter 10 . 1/19/2012
Wow - I'm totally hooked! I saw the rec' for this in CaraNo's latest chapter, and figured I'd give it a shot. I am blown away and can't stop reading...well, now I kinda have to stop 'cuz there's no more. :( My stomach was in knots waiting to see what would happen. And now they have finally figured out the connection presently. I'm dying to see what happens when they start to put together the pieces of her past! This is such a great story. I can't wait to read more. Thank you for sharing!

BTW - I love Moose & Zee...I miss them. My kids outgrew them a couple of years ago. I can hear Moose in my head pointing out the shapes in the pictures now.

~allidel :)
tinabambina chapter 5 . 1/19/2012
Tori sounds...riveting! And Edward is delusional xx
tinabambina chapter 4 . 1/19/2012
Lol! He actually was a yummy cabana boy! Love it xxxxxx
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