Reviews for Last Call
frlarsson chapter 3 . 1/20/2012
Love the chapter and the progress, )

best wishes, Linda xo
frlarsson chapter 2 . 1/20/2012
Wow, that was some heated feelings, there )

Love the first chapter,

best wishes, Linda
frlarsson chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
Love the prologue,

best wishes, Linda
bon123 chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
i'm definitely hooked. good story. goood writing. please keep going .thank you.
KG112 chapter 10 . 1/19/2012
Great story! I'm a Jersey girl so its great reading about places you can relate too. I can't wait to see whats gonna happen next!
danaelise chapter 10 . 1/19/2012
Okay- I just started reading this story because it was rec'd by carano, and I have got to tell you how much I love it! I am seriously so freaking hooked already. Cannot wait for the next update. Your Edward has me laughing out loud. My two year old keeps wanting to know what's so funny on mommy's iPad. I can't believe this is your first attempt at a story. For real. It's great. And as a fellow twimom I've gotta say that I am very impressed with your cake baking endeavor. ;-). My son forces me to watch hours of Yo Gabba Gabba daily, so I am well acquainted with that freaking moose & owl. Anyway, love love love the story! Thank you for sharing it with us.
allidel chapter 10 . 1/19/2012
Wow - I'm totally hooked! I saw the rec' for this in CaraNo's latest chapter, and figured I'd give it a shot. I am blown away and can't stop reading...well, now I kinda have to stop 'cuz there's no more. :( My stomach was in knots waiting to see what would happen. And now they have finally figured out the connection presently. I'm dying to see what happens when they start to put together the pieces of her past! This is such a great story. I can't wait to read more. Thank you for sharing!

BTW - I love Moose & Zee...I miss them. My kids outgrew them a couple of years ago. I can hear Moose in my head pointing out the shapes in the pictures now.

~allidel :)
tinabambina chapter 5 . 1/19/2012
Tori sounds...riveting! And Edward is delusional xx
tinabambina chapter 4 . 1/19/2012
Lol! He actually was a yummy cabana boy! Love it xxxxxx
tinabambina chapter 3 . 1/19/2012
I can't believe this is your first fic! It's bloody brilliant! So she's gonna go out with James? Also in what context does she know Em, Rose, Jasper and Alife?
kristishea chapter 10 . 1/19/2012
Great story!
tinabambina chapter 2 . 1/19/2012
Wow! Tell us how you really feel Edward! Don't hold back now xx
tinabambina chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
Well! That's a hell of a prologue!

Hi! CaraNo and BOH sent me, looks really good xx
bluevolvic chapter 10 . 1/19/2012
Lmao! Excellent meeting,glad that Bella finally knows that Eric is actually Edward and James brother lol she has no clue about their past and I kinda feel sorry for her walking into that situation,but it is funny too!

Poor Edward is trying to hold himself together and Bella's comment about mouthwatering things he can offer didn't help him in the slightest hahaha! Brilliant ... Loving this story ,and I can't wait to see how things go on from here :)
elaine67 chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
Sounds interesting
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