Reviews for Last Call
MoniNP Monica Nopi chapter 7 . 12/29/2011
O.o... bumpy you say? I cannot wait! .. and when E witnesses J&B's kissing... O.o... love you hon! xxx MoniNP / Monica Np
shaz308 chapter 7 . 12/28/2011
Thanks for the update. It's strange to see James and Edward friendly in a story, especially with Bella paired with James for now. I imagine Tori and James will match up eventually. Look forward to your next update, thanks.
vickie l chapter 7 . 12/28/2011
Hi another great chapter, I have no idea what taffy or swedish fish are!

I had to reread chapter 2. Did bella not take in what edward was saying to her as he took her order? she would have realised he knew her from the past. I guess rose does as she was quiet when they got to last call and R & E did have a conversation after B left the table.

I feel uncomfortable with bella and james, aren't i ridiculous?

Looking forward to hearing what happens after their bump.
Lilypad10 chapter 7 . 12/28/2011
Awesome chapter! Edward is going to flip when Bella comes to work in Monday. Fir someone that is engaged to be married, he sure has his mind on Bella a lot! Have a Happy New Years!
Luvtwismut chapter 7 . 12/28/2011
I was kind of hoping he'd catch Bella and James mid lip-lock, but bumping into her is just as good! Thanks for the update! I am so ready for bumpy!


kantstopreading chapter 7 . 12/28/2011
I love all the Jersey references, but am anxious for the shi* to hit the proverbial fan. Can't wait for the next one.
userunknown123 chapter 7 . 12/28/2011
Ohhh, let the fun begin! Thank you for another wonderful update!
DreamofRob10 chapter 7 . 12/28/2011
BWHAHAHAHA, I can't wait to see Edwards expression when he finds out his brohter is dating her and that she'll be working at the bar. I'm sure it will be priceless.

Now that they've run into each other again, I hope she haunts his every memory.
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 7 . 12/28/2011
This brings memories of visiting my exes family in Little Silver, NJ. The Jersey shore is so different from the Southern California beaches I grew up visiting. What part of the shore is this? I remember Long Branch and touring some beach resort areas. Interesting story!
Cullengirl37 chapter 7 . 12/28/2011
Loved this..and poor can't get over the fact that James is a nice guy in this one..nice change of pace..looking forward to the next update
troublefollows1017 chapter 7 . 12/28/2011
Uh oh. Let the games begin! I can only imagine how much he is going to freak when he finds out she's the girl James is dating and just hired. Fun fun fun. Great job honey bunny. Can't wait for more!


cejsmom chapter 7 . 12/28/2011
You can sing it to me in like 6 weeks!

Love the chapter Jen! Esp Em! Everyone needs one of him in their lives!
Mrs Boyscout chapter 7 . 12/28/2011
So enjoying this! It's such an original idea and those are hard to come by!

Can't wait to see what happens next. There's so much to look forward to: throwing James (who actually seems nice) and Tori by the wayside and Edward finding out about the amnesia. Fun!
shellshock81 chapter 7 . 12/28/2011
Zoooomg! You have this anticipation thing down, girl! I love Emmett. He's so funny:)

And...I can't even believe I'm saying this bc the thought makes me even made me feel happy for her that she's so excited about James. I just feel so bad for her having to go through all this crap.

I'm just dying to know if she remembers edward first or if he tells her who he is. You just have me hooked! Love it!

Hope you have a good new year:)
FFLoverLaura chapter 7 . 12/28/2011
gah! such a great chapter! cannot WAIT to see what happens next! you have me hooked bb girl! love it!
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