Reviews for Finding Bambi
sunshine102897 chapter 18 . 9/8/2015
Ah man. This story. Oh my goodness. It had the perfect amount of everything. Angst and humor and excitement. I literally couldn't ask for more. I laughed until there were tears in my eyes because the Harry Potter mash up was so awesome. Kudos dude, you made my day. Thanks for a lovely, non Bambi killing story!
See Me As I Am 101 chapter 18 . 12/10/2013
He should have killed the deer. I think it would have made me feel better, after all the pain of the Impala being ruined (and stained with blood) after Deans poor crushed, scarred leg to have some revenge. But I did like the Harry Potter references. And the journal entries.
Jankjay chapter 18 . 6/3/2013
You know, this was a little too "precious" for my normal tastes but you pulled it off nicely. Good characterization, sharp, fresh humor, and good voices kept me enthusiastically with you for the whole ride.

You have real skills. Thank you for sharing this with me.
My1SweetObsession chapter 18 . 9/4/2012
I really enjoyed this story it keep me going, it was a lot of fun to read, it's very well written, great job. Take care.
Beckydaspatz chapter 18 . 3/2/2012
Sam rolled his eyes. Revenge is a dish best served with baked potato, glazed carrots and a red wine sauce...- AWESOME!

Perfect ending, thank you SO much for writing it. LOVE that Dean couldn't kill Bambi. :D
Beckydaspatz chapter 17 . 2/29/2012
"Man, did you see the size of that?" Dean squawked, bug eyed in panic; "she looks like she eats furniture!"-! I *literally* choked on my lunch when I read this line. Just HILARIOUS!

And the added funny of her name being so close to Voldermort...just WONDERFUL.

Great chapter Jane, I've enjoyed every bit of this story and am (like Sam) sad to see it end. :D
Beckydaspatz chapter 16 . 2/28/2012
Ooooh nice twist!

Really love how each chapter is different than the last! :D

GReat job Diz!
Beckydaspatz chapter 15 . 2/27/2012
Sam nodded; "lookin' good dude," he murmured and reached over in a silent gesture of support to surreptitiously squeeze Dean's elbow.

He smiled; so like Dean to blank the learned doctor's words, and only be completely reassured by what came from his brother's lips.- I couldn't love this more if I tried. LOVELY. Another GREAT chapter! :-) And I'm getting closer to the end *gasp*. Whoda thunk it? :P
Beckydaspatz chapter 14 . 2/27/2012
BWHAHAHA! The button thing had me in stitches, good God that was funny! LOVED IT!

Little worried that Hermione's pranks might escalate, but damn in this chapter they were Hilarious! :D

Great job!
Beckydaspatz chapter 13 . 2/25/2012
Does it make me a bad person that 'end of his rope' Sam is HILARIOUS to me? Yes...oh well I can live with that. :P

Great chapter! Totally didn't see the talking journal twist at the end, I thought Sam was really losing it! Great job Dizzo, LOVE this! :D
Beckydaspatz chapter 12 . 2/24/2012
I just love this story! Sorry it has taken me so long to get around to the next chapter. It's brilliant and funny and well written. It's the perfect hurt/comfort. LOVE IT!

Wide eyes tilted up towards Sam, gauging his reaction.

That was all Sam needed to hear, and he allowed a broad smile to light up his face, a smile which spread infectiously to the face before him, softly crinkling the edges of the wide enquiring eyes.

The faint tingle of nerves that had been gripping Sam's chest over the last two weeks, ever since he removed Dean's leg brace for the first time, evaporated and he let out the deliciously long exhale of a man who had been holding his breath for a fortnight.-GREAT scene! :)

Sam laughed; "fracture whore," he taunted, flicking the back of Dean's absurdly spiky head; a testament to Sam's continuing ineptitude with the hair gel.

"Menopausal bitch," replied Dean with a grin.- BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! So AWESOME!

And Bobby at the end...poor guy. Poor Sam. But I love it, GREAT stuff! :D
Beckydaspatz chapter 11 . 2/14/2012

While I must say I was a bit disappointed to hear that you would not be marrying me, I must say I understand that you are already spoken for and so I will graciously bow out. *shakes fist at sky angrily*


All joking aside though this is another WONDERFUL chapter! Loved every bit of it.

Sam sat behind her, staring at Dean and silently mouthing 'you lying dickwad'.

"Ah well, we jus' do a job," Dean replied modestly, "but sometimes, things go bad," he gestured to his leg; "like this."

She smiled sweetly, "you take good care of that leg now," she smiled; "I'm gonna look out for you next time the rodeo's on TV."

She headed back into the café, leaving it so late to turn her head away from her incapacitated customer that she almost fell over a chair.

"You're shameless," Sam stated calmly as he sipped his almond cappuccino.


Dear journal

Complete tally for Dean's first trip out since the accident:

Large black americano and large almond cappuccino (both on the house courtesy of Shannon)

Two Krispy Kreme Donuts each - feel sick now

Seven assorted hot girls cooing all over the injured hero

Seven different phone numbers including Shannon's written on the bottom of our receipt


Ways in which Dean broke his leg:

Skiing in an avalanche - three times

Rodeo riding - twice

Parachuting into Darfur with medical supplies - once

Can't tell you; black ops … you know how it is - once


Dean wants to go out for coffee and donuts again tomorrow.- SOrry to copy so much but this last part was just SO good. So Sam and Dean. Wish to hell I could see Jared and Jensen act this out on my screen, cause I sure can see it! :D
Beckydaspatz chapter 10 . 2/4/2012
Oh the IMPALA! *weeps* It says something about my mental stage that I almost teared up at the state of the poor Ficitional car. :P


Great chapter, loved Bobbys demand, loved 'law boy', love the whole damn thing.

And I simply can't stop smiling. Perhaps Winchester Luck wanted to watch the game too, and she was too busy to screw with us this time. Perhaps it was just random good luck, or divine intervention, or Santa or the Easter Bunny? The tooth fairy maybe?

Who knows?

Whatever it was, just … thank you.- So says all of us. :D

Dear journal

Is there some law I'm not aware of that prevents folk from tying someone into a wheelchair and dragging them off to have coffee against their will?

Um, because if there is, I think I might be about to break it.-ahahahah! Oh Sam.
Beckydaspatz chapter 9 . 2/4/2012
How can you pack so much AWESOMENESS into one chapter? It's a gift, and one I'm SO happy you decided to share with the world.

I know Dean is too proud to give himself over in such a vulnerable and helpless position to just anyone, and that level of trust is both humbling and overwhelming.

And besides, it will be priceless blackmail material in future when all this is over.- LOVE THIS!

Sam chuckled nervously, taking a moment to compose himself; "okay," he sighed, tenderly bracing an arm against Dean's leg and began to wash the cold clammy foot, dabbing away the disinfectant stains with a gossamer light touch.

Once done, he gently dried where he could touch and wrapped a clean, fresh bandage around the leg to prevent the brace from chafing, finally strapping the battered limb back up into it's protective prison.

He stood on shaking legs panting as if he had just run a marathon.- God, how moving. I myself feel a bit out of breath...

Dear journal

It's been four hours and I haven't heard a peep out of him.

Thank you, Harry Potter; I love you - in a manly, wholesome, best buddies kind of way that's in no way weird or creepy, of course.

I wonder what time the bookstore opens tomorrow?- YAY! More HP! I LOVE HP! Glad to see that Dean has good taste. ;)

"Ya might wanna try an' get Dean off to sleep before I get back because that idjit's gonna tear the place apart tryin' to get to see his girl an' as much as I love that boy, I ain't bringing her into the house for him …"- So VERY Bobby Singer. I just ADORE this. I miss that grizzly old codger. :(

Great job!
Beckydaspatz chapter 8 . 2/3/2012
Marry me.


Jeez, this chapter was so, SO perfect. I will more than likely end up copying and pasting the whole thing. Fair warning.

But to see Dean in a wheelchair, even though I know it's only for a few weeks, shook me to the core. It's so very, very wrong.

To see something, someone, so strong, so active and free-spirited confined and immobile is heartbreaking. Like putting an eagle in a cage; it should never – ever - be allowed to happen.- I loved this so, SO much. Such a testament to who Dean IS and how Sam sees him.

Which reminds me what season does this take place during? Did you already say? Did I miss that? Am I just a big old dork? probably :P

Smeared glass doors slid open and the Winchesters plus one emerged from the hospital foyer into a world that looked as blank and cheerless as Dean's broken demeanour.

His eyes had not left his lap from the moment Sam had helped him off his bed into the wheelchair.

The defeated slump of his shoulders was all the evidence Sam needed to know that Dean was trying with all his might to be invisible; so far removed from his usual brash, noisy self that it was almost alien.

His shame at being wheelchair-bound was almost palpable; both Sam and Bobby could clearly see a fierce blush burning across his cheeks and it tore them apart.- Wow, this whole scene is pretty damn powerful.

Dean smiled mirthlessly. "Hate this," he ground out between clenched teeth as Sam manoeuvred him gently over the threshold.

"I know," whispered Sam sympathetically.-*tears* Just great!:')

He had barely got to the leaning-on-elbows-and-trying-not-to-look-like-he-was-giving-birth stage when suddenly strong, safe hands were pressed flat against his back and his chest supporting him, helping him up, and loading pillows behind him so he could lean against the metal bedstead in comfort.

"Thanks Sammy," Dean muttered without a hint of his usual ill-grace.

Sam handed him the plate, "there you are bro', bacon, hot and sizzly and a little bit crispy with loads of ketchup - just as you like it."

Dean bit into the sandwich and his face fell into a hamster-cheeked smile of bliss.

"You know, for a pain-in-the-ass kid brother, you make a pretty awesome sandwich," Dean mumbled wetly around the wad of chewed wreckage cluttering up his mouth.

Sam beamed, watching Dean as he voraciously consumed the sandwich.- God, I laughed SO hard at the mental image of Dean looking like he was giving birth and then my heart just melted into a happy goo puddle at the bacon sandwhich part. I'm loving the comfort this story gives while providing plenty of hurt. Where in the world did you come up with the idea?

"Sure," Sam smiled, "I'll do the bits you can't reach."

Dean scowled; "that's most of 'em."- LOL!

I think I'm about to add 'hairdresser' to my ever-growing list of duties.

Oh shit!- I'm loving Saint Sammy. Thanks for the Great read!
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