Reviews for Thoughts in Summer
ingridgrieg chapter 3 . 5/19/2006
I really like your style. I've been reading your fiction - working my way from the oldest one to the latest. :)

I like how you write Harry and Hermione.

I am looking forward to more of your work.
Leah6 chapter 3 . 2/8/2004
that was really great. i liked seein all their povs. -leah
Midzst chapter 3 . 3/21/2003
Great job on the POVs. They can be really hard to do.
Ken chapter 3 . 11/11/2002
Another wonderful series of ficlet! :-) This one I really wished you had continued on and make this a longer fics. All the monologue seem really in character and I wished they get together and talk about it. Yeah, and I wished Harry would appreciate Hermione more, especially after 4th year, when he took her for granted a bit. Did I mentioned I really enjoyed that? I did, still do. :-) Thanks for brightening my day.
Cyberwolf chapter 3 . 7/27/2002
Awww...(sniffles) this is all, somehow, ringing true to the characters Rowling writes. Hermione's was so sad, her worrying and fretting over Harry.

Ron's was was tender how much he cared for his friends, but you also put in realistic parts about him being, well, Ronnish.

Harry's was just heartwrenching. (glomps Harry)
lilahp chapter 3 . 5/25/2002
Nice story. I especially liked the Hermione chapter. Thanks!

Max LoneWolf chapter 3 . 5/8/2002 got the right thoughts that should be passing through Ron's Head..

Dunno what else to say. who's next?

ChrisMiss chapter 3 . 5/8/2002
Oh, this was so sad! Good job on the whole Ron perspective, you did a wonderful job. It's so sad that their friendship has fundamentally changed because of one event that should never have effected them so much. It should have just been like any other tournament but it changed the lives of all who witnessed it. I hope this miakes their friendship stronger. Ron might not get his friends back and have everything like they were since first year, but he will have them with him every step of the way just as I think they should be. Their friendship will be changed and all the stronger for it and I cna't wait to see what happens. Until the next chapter.
E. C. R. Potter chapter 3 . 5/7/2002
Magnificent, is what I'm going to say. I can see that Ron's POV is quite difficult, its clear in the writing. Yoku yatta.

I'm going to congratulate you and give you a nice pat on the back. Are there going to be more chapters in this series? Are there going to be more POVs?
Heaven chapter 3 . 5/7/2002
Yup, Ron sees it too, Herm has slight feelings for Harry...LOL I've got such a one track mind.

Excellent, just excellent!
Sherylyn chapter 3 . 5/7/2002
I didn't get a chance to review Harry's POV before Ron's was posted, but I really liked them both. I think you did a great job of capturing all of them. Harry *will* blame himself, and Hermione and Ron will worry about him, not matter what. And no matter what...they'll stick together, even if Harry gets his "nobility" out of whack and tries to discourage the other two from being with him! :-)
Animagus-Steph chapter 3 . 5/7/2002
Wow... for having a hard time writing Ron, I think that you did a fair job... I think that he is the hardest to write anyway.. He's all complicated and not well discussed in the books, and unless you're in the same familial position as him, he's hard to understand... I think you did a good job with it, though!

Do I see a similarity in fics? Harry not appreciating Hermione? The way you wrote it in this fic, though, I think that Harry has enough to worry about.

Gosh... This makes me apprehensive for OoP... I hope JK hurries with it.


PS... Normally, I don't see mistakes in your fic, but there are two of them (grammar). In your second paragraph, you say.."If he wasn't" when in fact, it should be "If he weren't." That is the subjunctive case. You make the same error in the next sentence. I don't mean to be picky, I just thought you should know.
NAPPA chapter 3 . 5/7/2002
You can never have enough fluff from Crrokshanks view. :) :) He is so darn cute!

SCUSA? Hmm... I've not been there a while. I don't see myself going there in a while too. I need to finish off my own fic. If I go there, I know, I will never make it back!

Plus I am kind of getting tired of how strict things are getting there. It used to be a lot of fun, now... well, it just is not.

Anyway... I loved this chapter. Odd. I know you don't like Ron! I know you're about him
Max LoneWolf chapter 2 . 5/7/2002
Wonderful takes on the minds of these two favourite characters of mine )

I know I'm a little behind on reviews and compliments ) I've been a bit busy...

Well done as always

ChrisMiss chapter 2 . 5/6/2002
This chapter was great. I can see why it was tougher to write but you pulled it off really well. The guilt Harry is feeling is so palpable. No boy of 14 (or is it 15?) should have those kind of things weighing him down. Someone needs to smack him upside the head so that he understands those deaths were not his fault. His parents died saving him and it a slander to their memory to think that they died in vain. He needs to keep those close to him closer simply because he may not see them again. A wonderful chapter, I can't wait til the next one.
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