|Reviews for This Is The Story Of Lyra and Her Mom|
| the.robert.downey.jr chapter 3 . 1/2/2013
Five mor seconds ;) haha
| Enchanter's Celsia chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
Okay, you have the beginnings of a good story here, a few things first though; the formatting is not all that great and kind of confusing and you could of had two chapters instead of one and used more details. Other than that I will follow the story and see how it goes.