Reviews for This Is The Story Of Lyra and Her Mom
Victoria Malloy chapter 5 . 11/20
thank you i love your chapters im telling all my friends about this
Victoria Malloy chapter 1 . 11/17
please make a 5th chapter this is amazing i love it
Guest chapter 4 . 11/16
please make part 5
berrycharm chapter 3 . 1/2/2013
Five mor seconds ;) haha
Enchanter's Celsia chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
Okay, you have the beginnings of a good story here, a few things first though; the formatting is not all that great and kind of confusing and you could of had two chapters instead of one and used more details. Other than that I will follow the story and see how it goes.