Reviews for This Is The Story Of Lyra and Her Mom
Victoria Malloy chapter 12 . 4/26
great job please update
Guest chapter 12 . 4/17
Great job I really like this chapter please continue
Victoria Malloy chapter 11 . 2/29
Great amazing job update soon your doing great and i'm glad you used my ideas
Victoria Malloy chapter 10 . 2/22
Please update iv been so bust lot has happened this made me smile and my day GREAT job please update soon love it
Victoria Malloy chapter 9 . 1/27
OMG I LOVE IT SO SO MUCH PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE IT'S MY FAVORITE STORY I ALWAYS LOOK FORWARD TO READING i LOVED THE CHAPTER GREAT GREAT JOB.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/15
God please update soon ow please please please i beg you i love this story o much it's my favorite i loo forward to it i check my gmail every 30 minutes to see if you updated please don't take long GREAT chapter
Victoria Malloy chapter 7 . 12/24/2015
Loved the chapter can't wait to see what happens update soon
Victoria Malloy chapter 6 . 12/11/2015
love it so much cant wait for the next chapter
RougeWolf97 chapter 6 . 12/4/2015
Plz continue :D
Victoria Malloy chapter 5 . 11/20/2015
thank you i love your chapters im telling all my friends about this
Victoria Malloy chapter 1 . 11/17/2015
please make a 5th chapter this is amazing i love it
Guest chapter 4 . 11/16/2015
please make part 5
berrycharm chapter 3 . 1/2/2013
Five mor seconds ;) haha
Enchanter's Celsia chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
Okay, you have the beginnings of a good story here, a few things first though; the formatting is not all that great and kind of confusing and you could of had two chapters instead of one and used more details. Other than that I will follow the story and see how it goes.