Man, so much negativity in the reviews! Anyways, i for one enjoyed the story. It’s a take I’ve not seen before and it’s an enjoyable read, hope you come back to it some day!

you go far to much into details, from table manners to chakra to everything and no nice training montage no just boring details on things any half decent naruto fan knows. i just hate a overly dumb naruto his reactions of huh? what? i dont understand? gets real old real fast, especialy with your need to explain it all, almost as if we are that stupid aswell

your story is boring, at this rate i doubt he ever meets fu, perhaps you'll just manage to finish the chunin exams. but ill never find out cause its a waste of time.

your writing is pretty good but you need to prioritise what needs to be explained and what can be skipped and recapped in a small summary. and ofc either finish a story or let it be known its abandoned

if a rinnegan user splits his mind between shadows clones than using them to learn faster is stupid, unless you can focus on 6 different things and absorb them. but rhen you would have a genius lvl of prosessing skill and wouldnt need shadow clones to catch up

the sharigan doesnt possess the power to control the 9 tale biju.
the sharigan can evolve to the point where it can control any biju but so far thwre was only 1 known in history. big difference

Not that this isn't a good story, but damn you. This should not have been tagged as a romance. I'm sick and tired of people dubbing a story a romance when that isn't Integral to the plot.

I search specifically for romance because that's what i enjoy reading. Stories like this, even though it's good, have become a massive pet peeve of mine. I mean damn I'm nine chapters in and the main girl hasn't even been introduced. That wouldn't be such a big deal but you write some pretty long chapters, ya know.

Two years without update, so the fic is dead. At 20 chapters, is still in the chunin exams and Fuu hasn't even been mentioned. If you come for that pairing, don't bother.

it should be Naruto vs neji

Don't keep yugito

You still alive, been over TWO WHOLE YEARS since your last update!?

updaaaaste pleeeeaaassssseeee

I'm great fan of your work jinchuruki of sixpaths. But kindly update , your story looses the tempo if your updates take such a long time .. common it's been nearly 1 yr and 8 months. This is a really good story. Pls continue writing and update soon... Been waiting for long

Great story I really liked it a shame that you gave up on it.

Kindly those who are registered members PM this guy to update the story. It's 1 and half years Already

COME ON DONT END ON A CLIFFHANGER

Ever going to update this again?