Reviews for Naruto: Jinchuriki of the Six Paths
mike chapter 2 . 7/9/2016
Hi the rinnegan can use sub elements
Guest chapter 19 . 7/6/2016
Pls update! Naruto x Fuu is my favorite pairing! I was a little disappointed that she wasn't introduced within the first 20 chapters as a kid. So far a good fanfic! Though you rushed "9 and 7", it was still good! If u ever do get back to writing this fan fic, pls consider a lemon between Naruto x Fuu?
Inu Tashiro p chapter 19 . 7/3/2016
Please please please! Update!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 19 . 7/1/2016
Surprised Sakura learned such an advanced technique, but I admit it was an original surprise. Also appreciated Gaara beating the poison gas

Looking forward to more!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 18 . 7/1/2016
Fantastic fight here between the two of them, although the audience commentary and observations really helped sell it.
Also LOL about the fight with Kushina
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 17 . 7/1/2016
Very good descriptive work for the Human Path

Nice touch on giving Sasuke less reason to want the Curse Seal

Liked your work on the Will of Fire, and LOL with Tenten and Zabuza
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 16 . 7/1/2016
LOL love the Anko and window metaphor!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 15 . 7/1/2016
Nice pep-talk to Ino, and yeah Gaara was a bit unnerving there

Good work showing Jiraiya's mindset when throwing Naruto off the cliff, and I sadly think this is the first time there was ever any mention of him having safety precautions. Also really enjoyed Naruto's retaliation! :-D
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 14 . 7/1/2016
Good point on why the sharingan would not be as effective against a puppet
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 13 . 6/30/2016
Good fight between Shino and Lee, first time I have seen them fight I believe
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 12 . 6/30/2016
Nice descriptive work on how well trained Temari is
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 10 . 6/30/2016
The comparison with Itachi was a good way for Sasuke to break out of that mental state
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 9 . 6/30/2016
Very good theory that in reality the Rinnegan was always Orochimaru's end goal. Makes sense given Kabuto's talk with Edo Tensei Madara

LOL for the Rain ninja thinking the clones are illusions
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 8 . 6/30/2016
That Asuma left the training to the kids' parents is actually very, very believable from what we have seen of Team 10's skills and lack of signs that he taught them anything himself

Nice and original speech from Naruto to Ibiki, top notch. Also original answers to the quiz questions

Nice irony from Naruto regarding a disguised Orochimaru being creepier than Anko

Good dramatic pause at the end
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 7 . 6/29/2016
Using Konohamaru's family status to calm things down has been done to death, so appreciate the addition that he dislikes it when people do that
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