Reviews for Naruto: Jinchuriki of the Six Paths
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 16 . 7/1
LOL love the Anko and window metaphor!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 15 . 7/1
Nice pep-talk to Ino, and yeah Gaara was a bit unnerving there

Good work showing Jiraiya's mindset when throwing Naruto off the cliff, and I sadly think this is the first time there was ever any mention of him having safety precautions. Also really enjoyed Naruto's retaliation! :-D
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 14 . 7/1
Good point on why the sharingan would not be as effective against a puppet
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 13 . 6/30
Good fight between Shino and Lee, first time I have seen them fight I believe
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 12 . 6/30
Nice descriptive work on how well trained Temari is
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 10 . 6/30
The comparison with Itachi was a good way for Sasuke to break out of that mental state
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 9 . 6/30
Very good theory that in reality the Rinnegan was always Orochimaru's end goal. Makes sense given Kabuto's talk with Edo Tensei Madara

LOL for the Rain ninja thinking the clones are illusions
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 8 . 6/30
That Asuma left the training to the kids' parents is actually very, very believable from what we have seen of Team 10's skills and lack of signs that he taught them anything himself

Nice and original speech from Naruto to Ibiki, top notch. Also original answers to the quiz questions

Nice irony from Naruto regarding a disguised Orochimaru being creepier than Anko

Good dramatic pause at the end
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 7 . 6/29
Using Konohamaru's family status to calm things down has been done to death, so appreciate the addition that he dislikes it when people do that
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 6 . 6/26
Very interesting idea that the Shinra Tensei in earlier version requires a 15 second recharge, but since Nagato needs 5 seconds that implies that either could learn to make it recharge faster

Appreciate Kakashi making clear that Sasuke and Co. are not like Kakashi's own childhood team

Like where Naruto and Co. start walking away from Jiraiya :-D

Easy to forget that Nagato was essentially an untrained civilian who killed three chunin before his training got serious, and the rest of his sheer level of genius

Enjoyed the conversation between Zabuza and Haku at the end, very sentimental (backs away from the kunai X-P )
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 4 . 6/25
First step in Sakura's growth: realizing she is in love with someone she does not even know, despite trying to talk to him for years

Really liked that argument between Sakura and her mom, showing us clearly what the parents were like regarding Naruto
Guest chapter 4 . 6/25
This is one of my favourite Rinnegan naruto stories it really is you have a steady rise in power for naruto and don't just have him spamming shinra tensei every second. My only criticism is that it moves along quite slowly
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 3 . 6/25
Ooh good point on what Zabuza has to teach Naruto about stealth!

Like the idea of Naruto getting back up each day to fight again because of his healing factor

Naruto broadcasting his attacks seems to be a problem he never got over in canon. Always leaping in the air to come down with a punch
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 2 . 6/24
LOL for Kakashi listing the number of things he should have done. Also accurate

Think Hashirama also held the title god of ninja
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 1 . 6/23
Nice point for Sasuke realizing that in other places having a bloodline would make him be seen as not special but reviled
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