|Reviews for Brock's Idea|
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 9 . 9/8/2012
He's going to call his sister! But awh, great finishing conversation between Brock & Misty & loved how the sisters are gonna try help Misty!
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 8 . 9/8/2012
Awh, loved the 'hopeless romantic' scene-getting me so teary-eyed. And I just realized Team Rocket hasn't made an appearance yet, haha.
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 7 . 9/8/2012
Awh, this was a cute chapter!
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 6 . 9/8/2012
THE POKEMON Tower, I loved that episode! Awh!
[Because I know my body's in Cerulean City and I feel like I'm just a shadow of myself. Like I'm missing something, fundamentally."] THAT IS BEAUTIFUL! Like, instead of just his heart back there, no, it's his entire body!
That was just a superb analogy of Misty burying the body, I feel like I'm going to cry.
No, Ash, that is NOT closure :'-( It's not closure until you meet with Misty and resolve this!
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 4 . 9/8/2012
["It can't have been that bad," Lily pushed.
"It's bad," she whispered] WHAT HAPPENED!? Cuz it seemed like this was never in the show, haha!
[Because Ash is Ash, I knew he would listen to me. He left really quickly. And I hate myself."] :'-( AwhhH!
I HOPE THEY MEET SOON! Wow, you're a fantastic author!
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 2 . 9/8/2012
[while the boy was sloppy and looked like he'd spent the last week in Viridian Forest. But the girl looked at that boy like he was light itself and she was hanging on the edge of her seat, screaming advice at him throughout the whole match. The boy would scream back at her and derail her comments, ] AWHHH-it's AAML all over again!
Awh, Shelley was adorable. Way to go!
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
omg, Ash heard!? haha-but this seems so realistic and I wish there was more of a Brock/Pikachu friendship in the anime. Really loved this and well written with details. Great job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I for one laughed at the 'Potato' thing. Nice story. I'm exited to see what is is chapter 2. :)
| whatdotheydream chapter 16 . 8/11/2012
Pikachu's pov was SO cute! The whole story was cute!
| whatdotheydream chapter 13 . 8/11/2012
I guessed! Which is cool, because I'm kind of dense... Hah. I figured it out when Brock was talking to Misty's sisters. :)
| whatdotheydream chapter 6 . 8/11/2012
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/6/2012
love your stories. only one problem. pikachu was never a fucking pichu! he has born in generation I, therefore, he was born a pikachu! rewatch the episode with the pikachu group. there are little pikachu (just too fucking cute...) but no pichu! also, i want to make a request. i think it would be awesome if you could write a humor/parody fic(preferably rated M) in which brock is a pimp.
| C'sMelody chapter 16 . 4/24/2012
WOW is all I can say after reading your story. It's incredible! You're a really skillful writer. The way you describe their feelings and sensations makes us, readers, actually feel them. And I loved that potatoe thing. Every time I read "Does poor Pikachu get another potatoe?" I laughed my ass off!
By the way, I read every story of yours and I must say you really improved, so congratulations! :)
Hope to read more from you! ;)
| ToBeSomebody chapter 16 . 4/13/2012
Absolutely amazing. I do believe this is the pinnacle of my reading experience to date. Thank you oh so very much for sharing this with us. There aren't many other ways I could imagine a perfect story to pan out. Job very well done, two thumbs way up.
| AlwaysTheTruth chapter 16 . 4/1/2012
A...masterpiece. I am as speechless as a person with taped tied on his mouth. This is an unbelievably Great novel. That I read all at once, word for word., for 3 hours. I'll never read a masterpiece like this on fanfiction again.