Reviews for Everlasting Promises |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I read your story and really liked it. It made me happy to know that talented writers like you still exist. That’s why I would love to work on your story as a comic commission artist. I want to turn your story into a comic, and I have some ideas and examples that I’d like to share with you ! Contact info : Discord : amabeck Best regard Amabeck. |
![]() ![]() pleaseeee pleaseeeee pleaseeeee update ugh |
![]() ![]() What happened to it not being a year… also nice editor |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy shit the dick riding is insane |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story until the last few chapters. I must be honest and say that I don't think it fits Percy Jackson, the Greek mythology series, at all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Plenty of work to do on the diction man. Like Athena calling them dumbos. Or saying “butt raped”. It’s not inherently bad but makes the story constantly seem like a teenager wrote it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Plenty of work to do on the diction man. Like Athena calling them dumbos. Or saying “butt raped”. It’s not inherently bad but makes the story constantly seem like a teenager wrote it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bahahahahaha Porphyrion get wrecked. I’m certainly amused by the unanimous wincing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bahahahahaha Porphyrion get wrecked. I’m certainly amused by the unanimous wincing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Urk please don’t use “lol” in a story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Could you do more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for doing that Nogoodnms, I love this story and I want to thank the Author for writing it and even though I got a little lost with this new world, that is not a problem with the story it is because I am fucking stupid, Cheers to many more |
![]() ![]() trash |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was great until the final 2 chapters like make a different story if your gonna do some random ass universe. This whole story went in a different direction. Apart from the final 2 chapters, a very good fanfiction |
![]() ![]() FUUUUUUUUCK THE SERIES ENDED! |