today i finally reached chapter 18… yesterday was the 10th year since the last update. i’m fairly certain now that it’s been discontinued but if you check here still, i’m begging you not to let this go unfinished. unfinished work makes me so sad and while i do understand the reasoning it doesn’t make the matter any less painful. but holy shit was this good and kudos to you. i hope you’re doing well wherever you are and if you come back, i’m sure many would greatly appreciate it

Sandwich

Very good book

Percy is a doormat.

Huh, didn't the A/N last chapter say something about the story not being discontinued? Been over a decade, or is that somehow not the case?

Wow, the A/N is angry. Those children would have been innocent and not deserving of being poisoned no? Also, your beta says you don't like the word that starts with r and ends in e, but some of what they listed included that.

How does she get off on telling Annabeth of for thinking Percy was cheating on her, when Artemis herself thought Percy was having an affair with a different girl and than beat him for it? Also, she deserves all the pain she felt in this chapter. Maybe when she sees him again she will stop beating him and treating him like shit.

Funny how Artemis is questioning whether or not Percy deserves love and if he will hurt her...when she has beat him twice in one chapter. She really truly honestly doesn't deserve Percy. She didn't even apologize the second time. Why didn't Hestia protect him the second time either? She really needs to curb her violence and actually treat him decently. She even tried saying he can't love and defend his family because there is no 'me' only him being her possession and she his mistress...then she tried crushing him...

At least she apologized for doing that to him...let's see if she keeps her promise. I don't feel quite as bad for Percy tricking her now, after that. I just hope he apologizes too.

Couldn't care less about Annabeth tbh.

Kinda hypocritical of her to only now realize he was their in order to start healing...yet she treated him as a slave and allowed her Huntresses to do as they did...only to now feel bad about it and realize he is a person? This was supposed to be a place that made life worth living, how exactly has she done anything to make that so?

Yeah she really doesn't deserve him. She still treats him like crap, and a servant, and laughs when he gets an arrow in his nuts? Like that could have seriously injured him, and she just laughs...

Yeah, shes being rather extreme. She is barely treating him as a person...

Artemis treating him pretty badly now :/ After everything, he does deserve better than that no?

Its been a decade. Its too bad this was never finished. I love this story