|Reviews for Sun in a Jar and Moon in a Cup|
| Templeton peck chapter 1 . 12/9/2014
motherly pride of the place? Well played Well played. Ok so not bad. Not at all. I wish that more people would do the Corny/ Lewis angle. Ok so what's up with the scarf that I did not get. Also the third bone in your hand has a specific name? I thought it was just another metacarpal. Also third bone starting where? Pinky or thumb. Sorry but I'm studying medicine my self and I'm pissed that I don't know this. One moment and I'll look it up. Ok I was right it's just called the third meta carpal bone. Phew. Any way I liked it, it was funny. Not a literary masterpeice but it was amusing.
| tokyoblackbird chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
oh. cute it's like expanding on the warm fuzzy of a happily ever after. i like