|Reviews for Here without you|
| Aligalloo chapter 17 . 11/21/2013
Aww. I loved it. Thanks for writing! :)
| Guest chapter 17 . 11/21/2012
wow good story, i was mad at both Jane and Alice in the beginning, but it all woked out, still i feel sorry for Alice, it is not her fault, that Jane could not see he was in love with another woman.
very romantic, cute and sweet endning
| pandamanda69 chapter 17 . 3/28/2012
ALL WAS PERFECT . AMAZING, LOVEEE ITTT
| Maya chapter 4 . 3/27/2012
Haha, very nice story, I hadn't noticed it before but when I saw it was "complete", it drew my attention. I've not finished to read yet, but the chapter in the French restaurant really made me laugh, since I'm french ! :D
And, just so you know, I've never eaten frogs legs, neither escargots until now !(and I'm praying for it never happen...)
Well, I'll just keep on reading I guess ! Thank you for this amazing story, I'll certainly try to read more from you.
(And sorry if I've got a bad english ;) )
| xfmoon chapter 17 . 3/26/2012
Well it was such a great story that now that you wrote an epilogue I just had to read that too and all I can say is awww, it was so sweet, and what a great way to end the story :)
| quibilah chapter 17 . 3/25/2012
I loved this, a great way to wrap up the story nicely. Can't wait for your next one!
| Rach112 chapter 17 . 3/25/2012
I enjoyed the drama/jealousy over Dylan, it added a nice realistic touch to this ending! There's just something about a paranoid and jealous Jane that is a pleasure to read...Thanks for the epilogue :)
| mpenguin15 chapter 17 . 3/25/2012
Yay! Bonus chapter!
I can see Jane being a bit paranoid about Lisbon when they finally got together. Nice and sweet! :)
| mentalistfan123 chapter 17 . 3/25/2012
AHH NOOO IT'S OVERR D: D: :'(
IT WAS SO GOOD(:
SO GOOOOOOD CRIES CRIES.
Such a good writer! :D
PLEASE START ANOTHER ONE SO I DON'T HAVE TO WAIT.
It was just so beautiful.
| kimmers44 chapter 17 . 3/24/2012
this story was super great, thanks for sharing! why oh why cant they do this on the real show lol? !
| Kaoh chapter 17 . 3/24/2012
Excellent conclusion! I'm very gald that you wrote this epilogue.
Terrific details here - absolutely adored Lisbon 's avoidance strategy - ingenious! I so hope that they use that in the show at some point! It would be nearly impossible to throw Jane off a pursuit - but I'm glad that Lisbon managed it.
Thank you so much for this - great stuff!
| Totorsg chapter 17 . 3/24/2012
OMG ! this is so beautiful !
i totally loved it.
just wonderful and perfect !
they are so cute together!
thank you for this amazing story XD
| Rach112 chapter 16 . 3/23/2012
They got their happy ending! So lovely. I've enjoyed every moment I spent reading this story :)
| xfmoon chapter 16 . 3/21/2012
What a great story! I loved it, and the ending was sweet! It was really long though, and I kinda read it inbetween doing other stuff, so I can't comment on details, but I just gotta say you have a great writing style, the characters felt very real and alive, the plot was catching and the language was inviting and flowed easily. So kudos to you :)
| quibilah chapter 16 . 3/15/2012
I loved it! I would love, love, love to read an epilogue or sequel to this! Brilliant work!