Reviews for Prey
Bushwah chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
And what a Hunt it was. Ah I'll admit, I feel better...
CentauRita chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Interesting. Not one for James, usually. Surprised that he is Edward's mate. It's all good, though. Good to read outside of my norm.
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
WOW fantastic idea. Loved it it was delicious.
M.33 Atris chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
Exceptional story! Love the blood kink, and it worked so well with Seth being their prey. It was also nice to see that even they had their limits and let Seth live to see another day.

BaerAndSheep chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
I have to admit, I was a bit reluctant to read this story, on the one hand because of the pairing, because as much as I love Seth and like his part as a boy toy in your story, I cant stand James. So, I started reading without much hope that I would really like it. But, honey, I need to apologize, when it comes to your talent I should know by now, that the pairing is not at all important. That was fabulous! I never thought I could get a kick out of a story involving so much blood and Seth being the human buffet. But, hell, that was really hot. And you do the supernatural aspect quite well, in fact you did great! Thanks!
All Tears Must Fall chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
Very different and very enjoyable _.
Yulliah chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Very sexy, and disturbing... But disturbing in a sexy way...

I kept wondering if I wanted to be Seth, or Edward... It was a hard choice... And that realisation was also very disturbing...
HeartOfDarkess chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
ooh loved it hun! These two were hot together :)
sasharose11 chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Great job with the prompt. I like that it's sort of a sanctioned game/hunt. I love that the three of them have this secret relationship. Very well done.
featherme chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
Holy Sheez! You went with that prompt and ran with it didn't you, bb! Man oh man, that was delicious and dangerous and...oh my.

Thanks for writing. Loved it! xo
sapphirescribe chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Good grief. Well done in filling that prompt. Jesus.
MusicMovesMyPen chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Hot Damn! This was just as amazing as I knew it would be! It really is a testament to how great a writer you are that I actually liked Edward and James together in this fic. I've never enjoyed a story with this pairing until now! And this fic had it all! It was sexy wild and kinky but there was still sweet and tenderness between Edward and James and even Seth in the way that they took care of him at the end. Awesome job as always, babe!


harrytwifan chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Jill, that was genius! What else have you got in that pervy little mind of yours! Loved it. What a surprise having Seth be a human, loving this for the lust and sport of it. Loved this: "...before dipping the tip into his blood-filled belly button." Never thought I'd read that line in a fanfic! Great job, hun.

xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
I want to sign up for this hunt! Soooo hot!
bbbluez chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Awesome and sizzly hot!
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