Reviews for Hero
francis2 chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Joe White has a lover - I love this! Poor old Joe deserves some loving. This Horace is awful. Can't wait to read more.
Wolf-007 chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
This story is really well done! I like how it's a complete circle even though the plot itself is not linear. Characters were great and in character.I really like the character of Fiona. Sequel or more in this universe please?
Shakespeare's Lemonade chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
This is a very interesting story for several reasons. First off, it's not like anything else out there. It's not something I would have thought of or expected to see, so many points for originality.

I also loved how you got into Joe's head and made him a more developed character for us. I like that we get to see how he thinks.

Finally, I think you've done a great job in crafting a believable original character. She has a back story, a life, but it's not so in your face that we get tired of her.

The only thing I wasn't sure of was her actual age. I picture her in her 30s from what you described. I like that she's not interested in men her own age. As a 20-something, neither am I.

I really hope you continue with this. Great job!