Reviews for The Fighting Spirit
DragonTetho chapter 34 . 10/3
Oh damn, here I thought its gonna be Jorge. Its given since they are Spartans.
DragonTetho chapter 7 . 10/3
Yeah, it'll take years maybe decades for Jorge or even someone from the USMC to be able to speak with the aliens considering that they were on a genocidal war but man I really hope for a Fem!Shep and Jorge ... Though I doubt that happening since I am sure the fanfic is dead.
MoinLeute chapter 40 . 6/8
Jorge isnt all that stealthy, do saying someone is more stealthy than him means just about most ppl.
Stormzy chapter 5 . 8/14/2022
Like the starting chapter and the writing is well done but I doubt a Spartan would have complied with requests from a foreign military in a foreign place to remove his armor etc.
Stormzy chapter 1 . 8/14/2022
Understand the concept of you trying to not overpower Jorge but at the end of the day it is what it is. Spartans outclass anything the Mass Effect universe has to offer. If you're going to write a Halo story then leave it as it is. Don't go the shit route of "downgrading" characters just to fit a narrative.
x6568tank chapter 38 . 8/1/2022
I love this chapter so much
x6568tank chapter 34 . 8/1/2022
x6568tank chapter 22 . 8/1/2022
what did Jorge do
1 love m4gic chapter 2 . 7/2/2022
Why would you shoot nukes with missiles when they can be put into a big shell and shot out with the mass accelerator cannon?
Cooldude101011 chapter 5 . 6/2/2022
I’m pretty sure specialised equipment is required to remove Mjolnir armour. Also I don’t Jorge would ever relinquish his armour.
Silverwingzz chapter 9 . 5/23/2022
You didn’t find anything on them putting on armor is because it’s only in the books, it’s rare for them to even take it off, I don’t see a sparten taking it off on a ship. Maybe at a base because of all the technicians that will be there but on a ship they usually kept it on and went into cryo.
Isaasol2 chapter 5 . 5/21/2022
I never looked further into that Ma'am line towards Halsey. Cause I heard mum and didn't think anything of it since Halsey is the mother figure for the Spartans. I just thought that he actually called her that amongst a few other Spartans.
RyTheGuy chapter 4 . 3/10/2022
Story starts on ch4 for some reason
dullen chapter 39 . 11/25/2021
Did Tali ever get that steak tube?
GloGang214 chapter 25 . 10/14/2021
shepard is so annoying to me
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