Reviews for The Fighting Spirit |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh damn, here I thought its gonna be Jorge. Its given since they are Spartans. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, it'll take years maybe decades for Jorge or even someone from the USMC to be able to speak with the aliens considering that they were on a genocidal war but man I really hope for a Fem!Shep and Jorge ... Though I doubt that happening since I am sure the fanfic is dead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jorge isnt all that stealthy, do saying someone is more stealthy than him means just about most ppl. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like the starting chapter and the writing is well done but I doubt a Spartan would have complied with requests from a foreign military in a foreign place to remove his armor etc. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Understand the concept of you trying to not overpower Jorge but at the end of the day it is what it is. Spartans outclass anything the Mass Effect universe has to offer. If you're going to write a Halo story then leave it as it is. Don't go the shit route of "downgrading" characters just to fit a narrative. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() o7 |
![]() ![]() ![]() what did Jorge do |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why would you shoot nukes with missiles when they can be put into a big shell and shot out with the mass accelerator cannon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m pretty sure specialised equipment is required to remove Mjolnir armour. Also I don’t Jorge would ever relinquish his armour. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You didn’t find anything on them putting on armor is because it’s only in the books, it’s rare for them to even take it off, I don’t see a sparten taking it off on a ship. Maybe at a base because of all the technicians that will be there but on a ship they usually kept it on and went into cryo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I never looked further into that Ma'am line towards Halsey. Cause I heard mum and didn't think anything of it since Halsey is the mother figure for the Spartans. I just thought that he actually called her that amongst a few other Spartans. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Story starts on ch4 for some reason |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did Tali ever get that steak tube? |
![]() ![]() ![]() shepard is so annoying to me |