|Reviews for Waiting and watching|
| xTCatxx chapter 1 . 9/2/2016
wait there's no chapter 2 "heart breaking" you broke my heart now fix it by writing what they were going to tell him
| Annoyed chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
The authors note was longer than than first chapter. And you people just disgust me! 5 reviews? So your doing it for reviews? You are not a true author. You know an author, Mallie something, writes stories, 25 chapters long and like only 4 reviews. You should be damn lucky that you have like three already. Ugh! And I don't know what to say on the snippets. Short? Danny's gay! He's dating his biological father!
Really. The plot's good but.. You know. I just did a rant.
| YourDaReatard chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
I like it
| jeanette9a chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
Interesting, I like the twist you made on the real story of DP( Real Original). ,