|Reviews for The Better Angels of Our Nature|
| dag21 chapter 26 . 7/1
I literally sob at the end of the chapter!
| JYoung3 chapter 20 . 5/26
"honey colored". lmao
| MaryAliKent chapter 1 . 5/20
Wow I can't believe I haven't come across this story until now. Chapter 1 is great! Can't wait to really get into it!
| karmel kaye chapter 7 . 3/29
OMG Edward reminds me of Buddy from the movie Elf. So eager to see and try out different things. I'm only seven chapters in and I had to stop just to review. Your writing is phenomenal. You really have a thing for syfy. The description is well developed and vivid.
| Kirk Almeida chapter 4 . 3/26
well your Edwards is a lot more fun than canon Edward
| Kirk Almeida chapter 1 . 3/25
awesome so far it's like carrie but not boring mixed with heroes and beyond to souls love that's jaspers her brother the guy never gets enough credit
| Sian xxxnxxx chapter 42 . 3/2
Wow, a fantastic story like nothing I have read before. Thank you for sharing x
| Anastacia T. Crawford chapter 1 . 2/28
OMG! I just read your story 'The_Better_Angels_of_Our_Nature' and ...Thank you, thank you, thank you so, so, so, so much for allowing the translation of this amazing story! I'm completely in love with it! You're a amazing author! and...I love your stories sweet girl.
I love YOU! XOXOXOX
| 27kirune12 chapter 42 . 2/23
I am SOOOO happy that I overcame the obstacle my mind created and read it, cuz... hooot daaamn, are you tryin' to kill me with honey-skinned, nude angel? Are you? Cuz it's working, oh God, it's so working O.O
Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thaaaanks!
Your writing style is simply amazing! And I love how you played with different character developments along the way, hats off.
| 27kirune12 chapter 7 . 2/22
This story is perfect and I'm totally in love! :D it's finally my cup of tea!
I love how you made Edward not-your-everyday-angel, except... I mean, I really get it... but... I'm kinda torn. I really love your work, but I really hate that Eddie's not a virgin...
I just... it's kinda anticlimatic, him being kinda innocent and discovering new, wonderful things while knowing he's already had one of the most precious, intimate experiences out there...
I get that it's not important for the plot and you probably didn't give it a fleeting thought, just went with the inexperienced-girl-experienced-guy classic.
I jist kinda deflated and there are all kinds of worst-case-scenarios running around in my mind now ._.
But I'm not trying to criticise your wonderful work, or anything! No way! It's very well-written and very-well written, it practically read itself! :D
Just... if there was a cherry on top...
...now you're probably going to block me from reviewing and/or reading this masterpiece... or you're going to report me... oh God, me and my big mouth /or my quick fingers/ are going to be the death of me...
| shyshy1016 chapter 42 . 2/4
Omg I absolutely loved this story!
| Siobhan Whitlock chapter 42 . 1/31
Wow, I cant get over this story.
I laughed... I cried... I got pissed... Your work never ceases to amaze me. I thought I had commented on this one before. I have now rectified that ;)
| Funsizedwitch chapter 42 . 1/21
You always manage to make me cry and at the same time rage at you. I adore this and I'm so glad that you wrote it! 3
| SweetNorthCullenGirl chapter 42 . 1/7
Aplaudo de pie... fue una historia maravillosa que me hizo reír y me hizo llorar, fue absolutamente hermosa... Ame a Edward como un ángel...uno divino y a cada uno de los personajes (aun odio a Kebi y me siento triste por Forks) muchas muchisimas gracias por escribirla
| SweetNorthCullenGirl chapter 1 . 1/6
estoy leyendo la traducción de este fanfic y me parece maravilloso... busque el original porque por la manera de escribir pensé que era una adaptación, pero veo que es tu creación, wow eres magnifica... y espero algún día puedas aparecer en Amazon con una historia como esta, porque es maravillosa... muchas gracias por escribirla en el mundo twilight que es el en el que suelo pasear