Reviews for Boss Fight
guardianofdragonlore chapter 1 . 4/23/2015
I pity those who have to clean up the messes.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
Hell yeah mrs. Pres!
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
I Love the First Lady! xD

She's so Awesome can made them understand each other's problem!
Wolf Productions chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
Aw! This was a creative little one-shot. Presidential America stories are really rare and most of them involve politics so it's nice to see a story like this. And the first lady, I'm still laughing over that. I really love that one part where the President and America were 'Demoted to mere children'. That was a great line and it really showed your point. I also really like how it was Benjamin Franklin's portrait out off all of the paintings in the room was the one to be broken. America and Ben likely created much shenanigans, but while being on good terms with each other. It's cool that you provided a short comparison from that relationship to America's with his current president in only a few sentences. Great job! I really love your president-America-relationship-oneshot-things that you do! I really have no idea what to call them, but I love them all the same!
xXBlazingBlueXx chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
Okay, I swear, I've probably read this twelve times and it still never gets old! Awesome
BW chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
I really hope you would read the review because I want to let you know how great you are!

I love all your fic because you write all of them in character! I always love your Alfred! Especially this time!

The President smiled. "I know that the holidays can be stressful."

The nation beamed. "Yeah, especially cause I'm broke!"

This is AMAZING!

Many authors wrote how Alfred upset to face the economic problem! But you are not!

I think Alfred dose know and care the problem but whateve he is still very him! An optimism in born! And this is the difference from him to other nations! This is the reason England and we love him! XD

God bless America!
Luigified531 chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
I live this story too! It was pretty funny! I love your OC for the President's wife. :)
StormKyrellFosten14 chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Great moral. Oh Alfred. I know how you feel.
mofalle chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
This was an enjoyable fic. I like fics where America interacts with the President and the First Lady. I think the First Lady's lecture was appropriate. You left it vague enough that it could have been any president. Well Done
OrangePlum chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
Why are your stories always so entertaining? Clearly a talent, so my creative side when not working or getting my degree continues to thrive on your writing. ;) Keep it up, it's always nice to see a new update from you!
pluckthefruit chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Awww! Fun! I enjoy the way you write Alfred :) And I've totally wondered the same about his relationship with his bosses (like, does he even like having to work with some of them? Cuz, you know, he doesn't choose who runs for president. When it comes to elections, people just vote for who they would prefer over the other, even if they don't like who they vote for.).

Great drabble! I love your works! :D
Shiva491 chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Aaaaaah. This was really heartwarming. And this line:

"She had called them boys. Her husband and her 200 something year old nation, demoted to mere children in the blink of an eye."

Had me laughing so hard. If I ever write something with America and the President, I'll keep this in mind. :)
Vani Jane chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
This made me laugh all throughout! Every time I stopped laughing, the next part makes me laugh again. XD

This fic really made a great image in my head to laugh over for the next few days. XD

...But um, let me get this straight- ALL THAT TROUBLE FOR A TV CHANNEL? *rubs forehead* I bet the First Lady has more trouble with Alfred than the President... XD

Thank you for sharing/posting this! (And don't worry! It's an awesome fic!)

-Vani Jane
A Bleach-Drinking Hetalian chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
I forget to drop a review, most days, but I'll share in my two cents here. I love that you didn't specify which president which leaves time and the la to the beholder, as to when this was happening and stuff? (Unless it IS Obama, in which case, EXCUSE ME I'MSOSORRY. ; u;) I love the strong first lady, scaring the living fudge out of them; I've seen some Mary Sue first lady fics, and they make me very sad. I love the pres. Just.. love him. *hearts* And guilty Al! DSL:FMAL:EJAGENGH. SO CUTE. SO ADORKABLE. *more hearts* And lastly? I love your overall point. So much. *THE MOST HEARTS OF ALL ARE GIVEN* So stay awesome. :)
MilleniumHeart323 chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Your stories are my absolute favorite :)

I love how real you make It by including alfred's boss and just the whole family in the white house

Very awesome

Hope to see more stories in the future!
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