|Reviews for Our City, Our Hero|
| DragonChild157 chapter 6 . 3/20/2013
Lol, Awsome. Found this in a friends favorites and it is now going to join my list of faces!
| caylender chapter 6 . 2/11/2013
I really love all these. The Rogues' relationship with Wally has always fascinated me. If you ever are inspired to write more of these, I would love to read them.
| IanPeriwinkle chapter 6 . 11/25/2012
I would SO like to see some more of this. :) It's really good - And I love the way you write James.
| DefyingMyGravity chapter 6 . 9/21/2012
So, in order of a timeline: First Impressions, Joker, Joker Aftermath, Luthor, Last Stand, and Last Stand Aftermath. Right?
Loved it, by the way. Why else would I try and put it in chronological order?
| Cookie-the-Rookie chapter 5 . 8/28/2012
This story is great! I love how you characterize (did I use that right?) everyone.
| Jazbez chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
First chapter and you portrayed the Rogues perfectly. I've always seen them as thieves with hearts of gold.
| guest chapter 6 . 7/21/2012
love it! read your bio, hope you update even though it's complete.
| GrayHeart chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Flash is a unuasl hero with unusual villians.
| RoxasIsReal13 chapter 6 . 6/29/2012
Really adorable and gorgeously characterizations!
| Vi-Violence chapter 4 . 6/22/2012
I have a minor issue with this chapter, I ship flinx.
| Ally Marton chapter 6 . 5/18/2012
Wow. I JUST finally read this, I had thought I read it ages ago, and aparently, that was SO not the case.
WOW! YOU TOTALLY WROTE IT! I'M SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW THAT YOU WROTE IT! :D :D :D
Heheheh, I loved this chapter! (ch. 2 is still my favorite, but boy, this comes in a close second!)
Okay, favorite parts time:
'"Fl–" Mirror Master did a double-take, "Have you been hit by a shrink-ray or something?"
"No!" Wally snapped.
I liked this part because you didn't automatically have the villains assume 'Flash got a sidekick!'. I feel that most writers would be inclined to do that, if only because they KNOW he's the sidekick and it subconciously makes its way out that way. Also, you kept him in his ORIGINAL original costume, sweet!
'"I'm here to take you in," Wally said, putting his hands on his hips the way he'd seen Flash do when taking to villains.
"You're not the first Flash-fan to try this," Cold said, "Go home, Kid Flash, or whatever you're calling yourself."'
And thus, 'Kid Flash' is born, who'd a thought the name came from the villain? XD This whole sequence was awesome, just because we got to see that, yeah, they're villains, but they're not MONSTERS (that's from one of your previous chapters, btw). They literally think he's some kid trying to 'play' hero, and then they realize 'holy crap! he's literally playing hero!'. XD Len is the best grouchy-protective-uncle figure eva!
'"Don't you trust me... Kid Flash, was it?"
Wally couldn't help the grin that spread across his face at being recognised.'
I just get all kinds of cuteness vibes from this. KF proud that the villains are recognizing him, Piper teasing him. seriously a good intro for KF and the Pied Piper. That, and the fact that, if I'm reading into this right, it all happened based on, what, a Poker dare? Either way, glad Hartley got Wally to change uniform.
AND THEN CAME THE TRICKSTER! MOST AWESOME INDEED!
:D Again, I LOVE this story that you've done, and thanks so much for this final chapter! It's totally a work of fanfic art!
Sorry the reveiw was so long in getting to you!
| Ally Marton chapter 3 . 5/18/2012
This is my favorite chapter, by far. Just rereading through this fic, and I have to say, I can never get enough of KF and Rogue interactions, its so awesome how their just a bunch of grumpy, protective uncles when it comes right down to it. :D
You have to wonder if Flash ever found out about that one, and if he said anything to the Rogues after it, but anyway, still a way awesome chap. thanks again for writing this however-long-ago that was!
"Did he just –"
"Yup. I think I'll run through the security footage to get a picture."
Hell, Mark decided, was teenage company.
| BFDreaming chapter 6 . 5/8/2012
My actual words at the end of this chapter: "Cute cute cute!"
| Bat-dove chapter 6 . 5/4/2012
Oh wow! The rogues are the ultimate protectors of Wally. Only Barry and Batman could be more protective.