|Reviews for Pains|
| Master of Gray chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
This was good.
| Bliss Whitely chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
this is really good! I enjoyed it very much! I feel sorry for Dumpson, probably one of the most overlooked characters in that series and I absolutely love him and Ayako together! this broke my heart actually! I could feel her pain and his. Nicely done, just wish it ws MUCH LONGER! ;)