|Reviews for What You Want|
| TheaMama chapter 1 . 6/7
I didn't want this one to end! Great story and I loved the exchange between them, so well done, I want more!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2021
Awwww absolutely loved it! So cute!
| rwong chapter 1 . 8/6/2019
My eyes were wet throughout the whole story. But I’ll tell you when exactly I broke into frank real crying. “He’d dance with her. He’d give her everything he had. He’d give her more than that, if he could figure out how. She never had to ask. And she never would.” Awww such moving words! I would die for something saying (ok, or just thinking) the same words for me!
The description on how they laced fingers and held hands was very romantic and went right through into my heart. I melted when Ron said “I am happy too”!
And of course this too. “What did he want? It didn’t matter. As long as he never had to want it without her.”
Beautiful, beautiful story! 3 thank you so much!
| guessthisismypenname chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
This story is so beautiful. One of the best I've ever read. I could actually feel every breath and whisper.
| Kelbris chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
Awww, so beautifully bittersweet and lighthly fluffy at once :) Thank you!
| lrigD chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Lovely. I can very well imagine this being in the book - except for the fact that it's not in Harry's point of view. But I really enjoyed it. It's so THEM - you know, shy and awkward and really sweet too. Well done!
| the iz chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
ive read this before but i dont think i reviewed. this is lovely :) very detailed to the point where a few times it got a bit dragging... but mostly it was brilliant. i like that you didnt have any dramatic declarations or ron waxing lyrical about her too much. they were in-character which was great.
| fvfrdtrxt chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Loved this - I do notice some small americanisms creeping into your work now and again, but to be honest, these pale into insignificance in comparison to all the good things. Your characterisation is excellent, you have a nice balance of dialogue and narrative - everything just flows really well and is so engaging to read. Well done!
| epic how chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
These two are more than magical with your words and imagination. LOVED it.
| potterweasleyandgranger chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
This story was completely beautiful in every single way! I loved it :)
| Kitten Kisses chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
This was a really cute "missing scene". I could easily see it settled neatly right in that section. The awkwardness was so endearing and in character that it all felt perfectly natural. Thanks for sharing this piece with us!
| womanaction chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
That was flawless.
| CypherVera chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
So so so good! I really loved this! Thank you!
| F Maurice chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Aw! So sweet. I like the play on words you had here (with Ron and Hermione saying the same thing, "You're a bit more than just one of my best friends...Did you know that?") Good job.
| fanohermione chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
amazing. so incredibly true to character, that alone makes me want to cry in joy of being a part of this community. its breath-taking.