|Reviews for Tactical Error|
| patattack chapter 19 . 10/2/2012
nice chapter. priscilla's outbreak was nuts, but sort of cool, not to mention sort of gruesome.
liked the ending with Mark giving Matthew advice on women.
| SilverKnight17 chapter 19 . 10/2/2012
nice keep up the good work
| rnn21 chapter 18 . 6/18/2012
this reunion caused impact XD.
| patattack chapter 18 . 6/18/2012
been a while, but the chapter was still good. liked the 'happy little reunion'. keep up!
| Tom-Ato13 chapter 18 . 6/18/2012
Yeah, a few fics have had a less than happy reunion, but at least Lyn is back dammit!
| dudeaga chapter 18 . 6/17/2012
FUCK YEAH! AN UPDATE!
My faith in humanity has been restored.
| Tom-Ato13 chapter 17 . 5/11/2012
Yes dammit the reunion! I could take this short chapter since it's one step closer to that. But DAMMIT MAN WHY NO ANSWER FROM MARK YET ON HIS FEELINGS! Yeah, I still remember that. *shakes fist* YOU BETTER DELIVER!
As far as the Priscilla/Serra thing, I have seen it done before in other fics, so it is not that uncommon, but usually the arguing was over a certain purple haired mage.
| patattack chapter 17 . 5/10/2012
nice chapter, a little short, but still well done. just one thing that I'd point out, Hector's decked out in thick, heavy armor, so I don't think it should have been so easy for the swordsman to injure him.
that aside, I liked the little competition between Serra and Priscilla. Seems a little out of character for Priscilla to be acting that way, but it's still funny, especially Mark telling them to go after Erk, and the others.
| patattack chapter 16 . 4/24/2012
nice chapter. will read more when it comes.
| rnn21 chapter 16 . 4/24/2012
Hey there, nice chapter. i really like how you make Mark more human than some others that i read about, that are kind of too perfect. The fact about his addictions add a nice tone to that too.
| Tom-Ato13 chapter 16 . 4/24/2012
What's this? No answer from Mark? CRAVEN CUR!
| patattack chapter 15 . 4/18/2012
wicked stuff here! I loved the conversation about mark and Lyn, and hector calling mark a man among men because of groping lyn (funny!).
keep it up!
| Tom-Ato13 chapter 15 . 4/17/2012
Oh we all know what his answer will be. In fact, if it isn't, i will have been completely blindsided.
On another note, your grammar and such has improved exponentially in recent chapters.
| patattack chapter 14 . 4/2/2012
very good story so far. Marks' drinking habits are kind of funny, specially the part when he and erk get drunk and have a headache.
good job describing Serra's annoyingness.
Keep it up! I can assure you I'll keep an eye on this.
| Kirako chapter 8 . 3/25/2012
Mark: I used to be a tactician until I got an arrow in the knee.
Oh internet memes.
Good story by the way!