|Reviews for Noir et Blanc|
| VongolaXII chapter 5 . 3/6/2012
I have to say I like your story, not draggy, i kind of like it _ continue, ai-chan~
| Amplifyingly Loud chapter 5 . 3/2/2012
Personally, I thought Velia's fight scene was better compared to Mai's. Like what I told Lightning (Shame on you Lightning for not telling Cloudy Days to fix it!), Yamamoto wouldn't hide behind a random crate drinking milk during a fight. But eh. Fight scenes are hard, no?
Awww. It's short. Could you guys make it longer? Anyways, update soon!
| JustSittin'OnCityRoofTops chapter 5 . 3/2/2012
Really nice fic~ :D
I like the plot a lot, i think its really well made w
Also the fight scenes are awesome~ o (ahh i wish i could write nice fight scenes TTwTT)
Ahaha, and Mai and Velia are cool characters too :D
Will be waiting for an update~ :D
| 0-R-0-a-0-n-0-d-0-o-0-m-0 chapter 4 . 1/21/2012
Nice chapter! Guess Mai is one for speeches, huh?
Thank you for the descriptions, it makes things clearer![I'm on my DS, so I can't write much, sorry]
~Scramble of thoughts
| Amplifyingly Loud chapter 4 . 1/21/2012
Yay~! An update~!
Eh? Training? More like a showdown of sorts! Let's hope they don't kill each other! And I can't wait to see how it will turn out! The Noir Guardians must be good at fighting...I think.
Please update soon!
| Amplifyingly Loud chapter 3 . 12/16/2011
Not bad my friend~!
So Velia is like Mukuro and Hibari? So like Mukubari? XD
She doesn't like the mafia, I got that. But what did they do to her other than create her? I kind of wished that she had more talk time. It'd be nice to know here character a little bit more.
| Amplifyingly Loud chapter 2 . 12/16/2011
Haha! Mai is a funny character! I like her personality. And I agree that Haru is...weird *coughANNOYINGcough* It was really funny when she played dumb with Reborn. Smart girl to say she was a Noir Guardian *doesn't mean to sound sarcastic*.
Ms. Watanabe kinda scares me. Is that weird?
| Amplifyingly Loud chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
So far it's good! It's really well written here. I like the beginning of this plot, cuz it seems different from what we normally have in the fanfiction base.
I'll be back~
| 0-R-0-a-0-n-0-d-0-o-0-m-0 chapter 3 . 12/12/2011
The idea is original, but it needs a bit of work in descriptions, and char development, either way, keep it going!
~Scramble of thoughts
| lightning587 chapter 2 . 12/2/2011
So... If anyones wondering we're going to take turns each chapter... except for the prologue...
I'll probably be terrible...
So sorry everyone because I"m not that confident...
| lightning587 chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Yeah! It's out!
Any reviews will be appreciated!
Also if any of you people are wondering "Noir" means black... in some language...
Also Sorry If I make the chapters CloudyDays12 writes sucky...