|Reviews for The Bet|
| titanfan45 chapter 3 . 12/9/2011
Nice job with Nevermore. The #17 reference added just the right touch of humor.
| titanfan45 chapter 2 . 12/9/2011
The fallout from Cyborg's pranks had me laughing so hard I had tears in my eyes, especially the Slade mask remark.
| titanfan45 chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
Raven ought to know better than that. Beast Boy can accomplish almost anything if he sets his mind to it. This promises to be interesting, looking forward to seeing how this plays out.
| FelynxTiger chapter 4 . 12/7/2011
ok that was simply adorable :3, Rae's emotions are making BeastBoy veery confused :/, no worries, his gift saved him :D
| cursed eyes chapter 4 . 12/7/2011
AMAZING STORY keep writing. I'm on the edge of my seat to read what happens next
| The Cretin chapter 4 . 12/7/2011
Yeah, I like how its goin. Two of the best things that stands out from this story is despite the bet and the hell BB is goin through he's not giving up. Likewise, Raven is analyzing her situation, reviewing her emotions, all the while not really realizing that she is, in a way, falling for the shapeshifter. This has truly been an enjoyable read thus far. I feel great I got the chance to read it. Hope to continue if its okay with you. Now I must go. King Minos summons. Keep up the good work or I'll feed you to the Minotaur...8D...LOL. May life be good to you. Keep rockin and good luck
| The Cretin chapter 3 . 12/7/2011
Chap 3 was well written. Good job on the changing perspectives. I hope Cy's done trying to interfere. It seems like all he does is get himself into trouble. Great work with the emotions. IMO, you nailed them pat. One more chap. Keep rockin
| The Cretin chapter 2 . 12/7/2011
I thought this was funny as hell. So Rob had a nasty flashback inn the hallway huh? The good ol'days of Gotham. I really like how you keep well written humor flowing with really good characterization of the players. Great coordination. Keep rockin
| The Cretin chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
I read all four chaps but I review by chapter as much as I can when I have time besides 12 REVIEWS ARE NOT ENOUGH!8D...Anyways, awesome first chap. The premise is interesting and promising and I really like how you handle Raven. This would be a great challenge for Gar. Keep rockin
| crazynerd chapter 4 . 12/7/2011
Really good. I can't wait to see what happens. That little bit about the joker was hilarious
| Aonns02 chapter 4 . 12/7/2011
Nice chapter! Hehehe, the emotions are starting to act! :)
Can't wait to see what happens next!
| Izu3039 chapter 3 . 12/7/2011
Hm, I like the story but the lowercase letters hurt my eyes a bit. ;;
But nice job!
| Wolvmbm chapter 4 . 12/7/2011
Now this was a great update. As it shows just how much Beast boy will go through to make Raven happy even when he is not talking. :D
Nice way of showing a majority of Raven's emotions are planning their own plot to obtain Beast boy. Maybe to convince Timid, they could remind her of the times that Beast boy is willing to protect her. :D
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one. :)
| Densharr chapter 4 . 12/7/2011
huh. Timid going AGAINST starting up BBRae is an interesting dynamic... one that I hadn't considered before.
| Aonns02 chapter 3 . 12/6/2011
Hmm... interesting. I just read the first three chapters and I must say that I'm hooked.
Keep up the good work!