Reviews for Colors of Adventure
QOD13 chapter 5 . 6/3/2012
I love this fanfic...
QOD13 chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
OH MA GLOB, so awesome! Is iris supposed to be based on the greek goddess of rainbows also called iris?(yes, i am a greek myth nerd). Anyway... PLZ CONTINUE!
Drakriff chapter 4 . 5/8/2012
I really loved how you ended chapter 4. You are awesome dude i cant wait for more dude XD
CHOCLatier07 chapter 4 . 5/8/2012
"Please review, I really like to hear from you guys?" lol question mark?
Dr. Erskine chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Das ist nicht gut! Where is my AT fix? Despite my preference for pairing fics, I find myself extremely engrossed in this particular story. The description given of the OC and her mysterious background leaves me wanting more.
Raab van Zandt chapter 3 . 1/24/2012
Even if this story's only three chapters in, I'm surprised at the lack of reviews it has. :/ I really like the story, despite its dark overtones in the latter chapters. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
xXxWolfxLoverxXx chapter 2 . 12/18/2011
Hellzo i love your story! its awesome! and i hope 4 more sooooon!
DinoChao chapter 2 . 12/17/2011
if its one thing i like in stories, it's creeepy-rapists. :D please continue :3
IceAnt573 chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
This is a good start for a first fanfic. It's not mind-numbingly short like most others. I like how you described some of the scenery and your characterization is spot-on. Having a rainicorn-human o.c. sounds interesting and a good concept. Now they are a couple of things that are bothering me. Lady Rainicorn's race is actually called rainicorn and not unicorn but it isn't no big deal. I don't know if you just prefer to spell Marceline's name with two L's or you didn't know it was. Last thing that just personally bugs me is the I's being the first word I see in every line. Examples would be I frowned, I helped, I blush,etc. You could occasionally say "This made me blush...". Spelling is good but I swear I thought I saw "Bubblehum" and a couple others. Overall I give the chapter a 7.5/10 which is again, good for a first fanfic.
CHOCLatier07 chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Yay! Finally! Haha keep writing the story