Reviews for Genma's Daughter
Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2016
*cheers wildly*
Lyokobo chapter 8 . 3/30/2016
Enjoyed this alot. Really appreciate how much effort you put into writing us practically an entire book! And that work hasn't gone unnoticed. That being said there's a few quirks that seem off to me. You portrayed some characters well, such as kuno's dialect and nabikis attitude of indifference, however some things felt quite out character, akane being the biggest one to me. Most of the time she sounded very much so like a doctor or psychologist of sorts, and it felt really out of place. At times the narrative got a bit too much as well. All the characters felt too geared towards rankos feelings and didn't leave much room for conflict or interesting dialogue. Also, some things felt very blatantly worded, an example being maybe the scene about rankos... time of the month. Instead of dropping all the major clues right away try easing things for longer into a more surprising reveal. Subtlety can go a long way. Overall I really enjoyed this fanfic. Definitely the longest one I've read. And I would really love to see more work from you!
endofgames chapter 14 . 3/4/2016
It's an interesting way to end a fanfic
unknown chapter 14 . 11/1/2015
bad story
Naora91 chapter 14 . 8/12/2015
That was enjoyable. A tad fast in some places but I enjoyed it all the same.
coolcat051 chapter 2 . 5/2/2015
Hi! I don't know if whoever wrote this is still here but if they are...THIS IS AMAZING! I just started reading this today and was wondering if you would upload this to wattpad?! PLEASE do and if you can't, could i possibly do it?, oh course i would give you ALL credit and ALL rights to the ranma 1/2's copyright holders but please consider uploading it to wattpad as i think a lot of people would deeply appreciate it! ( Including me! ) :D
smashman42 chapter 14 . 3/30/2015
Beautifully crafted story.

One thing I'm quite impressed about is that you resisted pairing Akane up with someone because Ranma was absent, or indeed forcing Akane and Ryoga together instead of what ended up happening. This story was all about Ranko, what does or does not happen with the other characters is pretty irrelevant and would only have complicated or clouded the true story in my opinion. Way too many authors try to pair up everyone by the end of the story when real life simply isn't like that, so kudos for avoiding that trope.

This is about Ranko's self-(re)discovery; that's what you focussed on and that's all that matters.
Ranmazon chapter 14 . 1/23/2015
I kinda wish you mention where this was set especially if it was set after "Am I Pretty: Ranma's Declaration of Womanhood" because you could have used that to explain why after being cure of the curse she fully accepts being a girl
Guest chapter 4 . 1/22/2015
I think Ranko should said it this way

"You know, Mother" then she whispered "wheather or not I stay this way" then she went back to a normal voice "I...I think I would like to go again next year. That was fun"
Guest chapter 4 . 1/22/2015
It's Tendo not Tendou
maryjane5000 chapter 14 . 1/23/2015
I love this fic you made it very vivid that I could actually picture what was happening however there's one thing about this fic that I didn't like & that is how fast Ranma changes after he accepts that he is really Ranko I mean

First Ranko decides to wear a bikini the first time she goes to the beach maybe during a second trip I could understand but not the first time unless the girls dared her then aside from the school uniform she starts wearing skirts & dresses instead of pants right off the back once again I can't see her doing this right off the back however I can see her doing it gradually until the curse is destroyed and finally she forgives Genma for putting her though 12 years of hell BULL, although I can understand her giving him a chance to earn forgiveness & that can only be done if he's around

Now with that said there's a couple of things that I wish would have happened

In chapter 1
After Nodoka leaves both Tendo sisters (Akane/Kasumi) go over what was said & get after Ranma for his behavior I wish he would have accused them of being drugging by the Amazons as part of a plan to drag him off to china

In chapter 2
After Ranma goes for a walk & Akane talks with Kasumi about how Ranma's hurting I am a little surprised that she didn't say anything about how she added to his pain

In chapter 12
When they were in the locker room after lunch Ranko should have thanked Yuka for the save & since that Ryoga confirmed it was a prank Sayuri apologize then Ranko apologizes for ignoring them & explains that she was going turn it back on her
maryjane5000 chapter 9 . 1/23/2015
I'm sorry but I have to call BULL$#! here. I mean Ranko has basically more or less said

"Oh Daddy, I forgive you for turning me into a boy, for making me a martial artist against my will, for giving me a fear of cats, for cursing me, for making me a misogynist pig by drilling that crap about women into me, for engaging me to multiple women including my "sister" & best friend"

& in this chapter she tells her mother that but Why?, is it because he took him to Jusenkyo to try & fix what he did, I doubt it since he never says a word about why they were going there before or after getting curse he just let's her think he's a dumbass. Is it because he was the only parent he(she) had for 12 years again I doubt it since he acted more like a sensei then a parent so again I ask, Why does she forgive him so easily?
Guest chapter 11 . 11/16/2014
I u
RankoFan chapter 14 . 9/26/2014
This is one of my favorite stories that I've read to date. Unlike a lot of stories, this one it seems like I can actually feel the emotions of the characters and it's very moving. I really enjoy the whole story and I do not even know how many times I have read it.

Excellent work.
TippyToe Zombie chapter 14 . 8/25/2014
I'm confused throughout this fic they talk about the emotion in her playing but she's having a problem with it in Notes from Julliard. It seems like the two contradict one another.
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