Reviews for Second Thoughts
erisam chapter 1 . 5/22
i texted my friend and then she said "the only reason you're every up this late is because you're reading porn, are you reading porn?" and i said "is the sky blue? is eridan's cum purple?" and she said "ok time to stop"
LillyRoseM chapter 2 . 4/8
I have no words to express how much I love this story. This is the 7th or 8th time I have read this I think...I have lost count. Eridan and Sollux didn't go out of character,which I see alot, but you did it perfectly! The detail in this story was amazing as well. But what I LOVED the most was the pace of the story. It didn't rush into anything and end quickly. The tension built up and lasted,allowing anyone who reads this to actually have a chance to understand what was happening at all times. All in all this was a beautifully written. I give it a 10,000/10 please continue to write stories like this. (also it was extreamly f*cking sexy!)
BleedingJoyAndSorrow chapter 1 . 10/25/2015
Wonderful. Wow. Thank you so much and please keep up the great work!
yaoilover34 chapter 1 . 8/20/2015
AWESOMNESS (poor eridan though)
CiaranCrockerbert chapter 2 . 2/5/2015
Well done. I applaud you. Like, I'd actually be clapping and smiling rn but there are other people around and that'd be really awkward to explain.
Well done.
I just rly like Erisol and black-to-red quadrant flipping is my weakness AND psionic use? Almost cheating. So. Yeah.
Def save and favorite. 10 out of 10 will read again.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/3/2015
98% was smutty yaoi and I. Enjoyed. Every. Fucking. Second. Of. It.
Keep goin
ForeverAnOddity chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
Hate sex. It's an incredible thing.
Nasulilninja chapter 2 . 5/24/2014
Karkat will flip ALLLL DA SHITS
get it
de fin atly
so punny
Guest chapter 2 . 1/31/2014
fUCK that was hot and then adorable and I can't even
BBYImJazzy chapter 2 . 1/28/2014
"Karkat was going to flip a shit."

XDD I'm laughing more then I should be.
But great story -
Dave Stridick chapter 2 . 12/4/2013
yep, i knew i shouldnt have read this at school.
Dave Stridick chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
holy shit man there were tears in my eyes halfway through this
not because its sad, or anything, but hot damn that is so goddamned sexy

you have a gift for writing smut that i wish to hell i could have
jesus fuck, be proud, yo
I can't even chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
This was absolutely amazing.
I applaud you.
Incredibly descriptive, well paced, you didn't rush anything (Which I've seen a lot of, especially in smut) and it captured the emotional as well as physical act of pailing extraordinarily.
angstwithtea chapter 2 . 10/12/2013
that. was. SEXY. X3
JaLynn chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
That was an extremely descriptive story, and I loved it because it involved my two favorite characters other than gamzee. It was amazing
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