Reviews for The Sharpened Blade
sandy4321 chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Great chapter!
let'sdisappeartogether chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Amazing chapter:) I'm really excited to read the rest of the story! :)
vampgirl138 chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
sounds great
lvk1978 chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
You've got a wonderful beginning here. You've established Bella and Edward well and have begun to introduce the ancillary characters. I like the tension between Edward and Bella. I think that Edward already likes Bella although he certainly has a strange way of expressing himself. He seems like a nice enough guy, but he is very definitely rough around the edges.

The only "concern" I have (and it's very minor) is that although the story seems to be set in the US, there are some "Britishisms" scattered throughout the text. Like I said, it's a minor concern, but some people might find it jarring to go between "dollars" and "uni".

I really like your "rough around the edges" Edward and your Bella seems feisty enough to keep up with him. I look forward to reading the rest of your story. Thanks for posting.
FFFan1664 chapter 1 . 12/3/2011

Waiting for more

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