|Reviews for Collateral Damage|
| LondonLi chapter 7 . 5/22/2012
I really, really like your version of how they come together. You're keeping a lot of elements the same, but fleshing out all the details we miss. Thanks for posting!
| Ciza chapter 7 . 5/22/2012
omg! I love this story and how you write it! thanks for keep writing it!
update soon please :D
| Dee47 chapter 7 . 5/22/2012
Ahhhh! I'm so, so happy to see a new chapter! Please hurry with that next one!
| FaithinBones chapter 7 . 5/22/2012
Brennan is very conflicted. She wants to protect Booth; but, really can't do that. Update when you can.
| threesquares chapter 5 . 5/19/2012
Oooh! She's pregnant! Oooh! Showering together! Fantastic story! Michele
| threesquares chapter 4 . 5/19/2012
I was really glad that you had Brennan confess her jealousy. I think that's tough to write about without somehow undermining Brennan's relentlessly positive position toward the relationship, as shown in the episodes. You did it really well; I was moved. Still love this story! Michele
| threesquares chapter 3 . 5/19/2012
I like what you decided to show about the hospital and what you decided not to show. Booth's interactions with Brennan are of course, really important, so it is wonderful that they get so much air time. Thanks! Michele
| threesquares chapter 2 . 5/19/2012
I think that you write Brennan beautifully. I love this story! Michele
| threesquares chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
I love this chapter, as you know, if you read my review of the last chapter. I got butterflies in my stomach when I was working out the logistics of the sentence about her kissing Booth's neck. The conversation about them talking later was great! Great story.
| threesquares chapter 6 . 5/19/2012
AHHH! I only just found your story. I'm sure there are MILLIONS of people out there just. like. me. Really. Bones fan fic is alive and well. PLEASE finish the story. I love it! You write very well. I didn't read the first author's note, preferring to just start stories and see where they go rather than be forewarned about what seasons they are taking place in or whatever and so of course I was totally surprised by Booth being shot! One thing that was very different than any other post Hole in the Heart, post-fade to black as you call it, fics was the tone you set. Booth sitting by her bed and waking her up. Many stories are, understandably and satisfyingly in their own way, very weighty, dark, and angsty the next day when they wake up. I found that you struck the best balance with the conversational tone that carried with it the ease of hundreds of such conversations (even if not in these circumstances) and Brennan was convincingly worried about what happened next but also was ready to kind of just go with things as they unfolded. I know I'm not explaining very well, but I just was impressed with the whole first chapter, really. I'm going to go back and add a little review to each chapter so that you can see your reviews jump a little. You deserve it and I would love to keep you happy. Please keep writing. :-) Best wishes, Michele
| caracoleta07 chapter 6 . 4/30/2012
I’m glad to see Angela as her true self. I think that down at FOX they’ve been running out of ideas for her character, ‘cause I really haven’t enjoyed her in the last 2 episodes…
| caracoleta07 chapter 5 . 4/30/2012
So there was my answer _
Oooo… Brenan do you have anything to share with the class? xP
And I hope Booth doesn’t forget his promise…
Oh you’re doing a wonderful job! I can’t wait to see where you’re going with this
| caracoleta07 chapter 4 . 4/30/2012
Scarface! Did you get the inspiration for that from the end of The Prince in the Plastic? That scene was hilarious!
Loved the end of this chapter ;)
| caracoleta07 chapter 3 . 4/30/2012
Well this story is flowing beautifully! You’re a very good writer.
I don’t know what’s up with my account but I haven’t been getting e-mail alerts for a while now… Upside? - I gotta several chapters to read xP
| Jazzyproz chapter 6 . 4/8/2012
Yay! Booth is going to be so happy. Please please let her tell him soon! I'd hate to imagine her torturing herself dealing with it on her own.
Love your story. Looking forward to the next installment!