Reviews for Memory Palace
Jisbon28 chapter 5 . 6/29/2017
This was fantastic. Every part of it. Thanks.
LouiseKurylo chapter 5 . 8/20/2016
Beautifully done. I can easily see each reacting as they did. You did a particularly nice job with the psychiatrist helping Jane get past the lies he was trying to make himself believe.
rcfan77 chapter 5 . 12/23/2014
Good story :)
rcfan77 chapter 4 . 12/23/2014
ouch...very mean !:)
rcfan77 chapter 3 . 12/23/2014
great story so far :)
bubblersparadise chapter 5 . 6/17/2013
A great story
MentalistLover13 chapter 5 . 4/16/2013
This story was amazing! Great, Great job!:)
MartyMac chapter 5 . 3/11/2013
This was a beautiful story. It seemed so much fuller, richer than other stories. Maybe the combination of angst comfort and mind-blowing sex made it so complete.

I have only recently gotten an iPad and so am reading fanfic like a maniac. I most certainly love your writing. This does explain why you are receiving all of the reviews from me lately. Thanks for all your wonderful stories! MM
sweetlovebird1 chapter 5 . 3/4/2013
Great story! Beautifully written! The sex scene in chap 5... SUPER HOT!
Killingdanse chapter 5 . 8/15/2012
Great story but I still think that there will be horrible consequences to all of this. Jane doesn't really have the ability to hold onto happiness. Something will screw it up or Red John will actually get her.
Strabo chapter 5 . 8/13/2012
are u making a sequel?
Cuz id love one.
i liked this story
CF chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Write more like this! Your writing is very hot :P I love the angsty desperate jane and lisbon 'finally kiss' sex and jane when he just takes over like in your other stories. very very well done and each story seems different from the other.
The Petulant Prodigy chapter 5 . 2/16/2012
I think I love you. This was incredible thanks for being a talented writer who didn't get cocky and do something crazy with the characters. It felt organic, natural, and forgiving. Gorgeous work, my friend. -TPP
evonna chapter 5 . 1/8/2012
that was some hot and heavy sex.


And no, it didn't disappoint :)

At all.

And the sex scene and lead up to it in chapter 1 was gorgeous as well, what with Jane being all honest and free and easy and naughty and smutty (instead of all damaged and in mourning as usual).

I've always loved it that you don't shy away from the rougher side of sex in your stories, and that you describe everything in detail. I often find myself reading an M rated story, just to have the writer skip over ALL the good bits :) no such predicament here.
Sci-fi Christian chapter 5 . 12/26/2011
Awesome story. I love how you captured Jane's fear of loving someone. I'm glad he worked it out in the end, and admitted his feelings for Lisbon. Great job! ;)
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