Reviews for Memory Palace |
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![]() ![]() Loooove this Great Story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was fantastic. Every part of it. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully done. I can easily see each reacting as they did. You did a particularly nice job with the psychiatrist helping Jane get past the lies he was trying to make himself believe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ouch...very mean !:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story so far :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was amazing! Great, Great job!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a beautiful story. It seemed so much fuller, richer than other stories. Maybe the combination of angst comfort and mind-blowing sex made it so complete. I have only recently gotten an iPad and so am reading fanfic like a maniac. I most certainly love your writing. This does explain why you are receiving all of the reviews from me lately. Thanks for all your wonderful stories! MM |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Beautifully written! The sex scene in chap 5... SUPER HOT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story but I still think that there will be horrible consequences to all of this. Jane doesn't really have the ability to hold onto happiness. Something will screw it up or Red John will actually get her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() are u making a sequel? Cuz id love one. i liked this story |
![]() ![]() Write more like this! Your writing is very hot :P I love the angsty desperate jane and lisbon 'finally kiss' sex and jane when he just takes over like in your other stories. very very well done and each story seems different from the other. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I love you. This was incredible thanks for being a talented writer who didn't get cocky and do something crazy with the characters. It felt organic, natural, and forgiving. Gorgeous work, my friend. -TPP |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was some hot and heavy sex. INTENSE. And no, it didn't disappoint :) At all. And the sex scene and lead up to it in chapter 1 was gorgeous as well, what with Jane being all honest and free and easy and naughty and smutty (instead of all damaged and in mourning as usual). I've always loved it that you don't shy away from the rougher side of sex in your stories, and that you describe everything in detail. I often find myself reading an M rated story, just to have the writer skip over ALL the good bits :) no such predicament here. |