|Reviews for The Mischief Makers|
| Evie Delacourt chapter 25 . 12/20/2012
Wonderful wrap-up! Now I'm looking forward to Jon Story #3... *grinning, ducking and running very, very fast!*
| SunnyFla chapter 9 . 1/21/2012
Just read this all in one go again, and do love it.
Jonathan is so...complex - wanting to do the right and noble thing but falling prey to his basic weaknesses. And now he's in a right load of it.
Geez, you do like to make things impossible for him, don't you? But so much of it his own doing.
I do hope the Duke has a side plan in place, but this is not good.
Loved your imagery for the gaol, and its inhabitants!
ok, next please. how the heck does he get out of this?
| SunnyFla chapter 7 . 1/21/2012
oh no. Did Jon learn nothing about drinking too much? What a mistake to make so soon.
Do like how you've shown us his emotional reaction to being back here, and how easily he has fallen into wanting to be the big man. Shame it will come back to bite him.
Randall is a good bad guy. How pathetic for him that he's spent 6 yrs looking for revenge, but can so see him doing just that. This is not going to be good.
| SunnyFla chapter 5 . 1/21/2012
Very nice touch. A ribbon. So Edith is smart as well, and knows enough to recognize when she's wrong.
Enjoyed this chapter, and am a bit on edge now that his journey is starting.
| SunnyFla chapter 4 . 1/21/2012
Really loved this. Edith is so good for him, and her reaction so right. Poor girl.
I like Kate. Very strong and insightful woman. Nice the way she didn't rant and rail at Jon, but still gave him hope.
Jon is just so...good. Can't wait to see where this decision takes him.
| Araminta Lupin chapter 9 . 1/21/2012
I've been following this story avidly from the start, and am now shaking my fist angrily at Randall, who is bad to the bone! There must be some way for Jonathan to clear his name? Really hope there is!
| SunnyFla chapter 3 . 12/17/2011
More intrigue! Looks like spy it is.
Really loving the tension. Wonder what/how he'll tell Edith and how she, (and her mother!) will react.
Very interesting and cool story line. Seems he's in for a bit of a time! Really liking this.
| SunnyFla chapter 2 . 12/17/2011
What a great relationship being created! Smiling as I read.
Jonathan. So glad to see him so healed. And having...some responsible thoughts!
And Edith - like her! Strong, smart, knows what she wants. Good for her.
Again, lovely imagery, like the desc of Edith (the nose was v clever).
| SunnyFla chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
What a start!
Am hook, line and sinker caught.
Plotting, treason, arson, murder- and that's just the prologue! Cannot wait to see where this goes, and just what Jonathan is in for.
Really love the way you give the characters such personality, and the images you create are so detailed and powerful. Feel like I'm there with them, in on the conversation.
Want to know who the poor bloke was in the water...