This story is actually very good. I cannot wait for the next update.

wso far your story is excellent my friend.

A better start for this story. Hopefully you can get this story to a whole new level. Good luck.

I love it so far! No real problems I can see anymore. Youre spelling is good, as is grammar.

Oh, and if you're a fan of "Tales of a Gutsy Biju", I think I should tell you that I'm going to be remaking it. I'm not gonna say "rewriting it" because the only elements the remake will share with TGB are character personalities.

Anyway, good story.

Very good follow up chapter you did a good job with the time skip so we don't have to read 5 chapters on the academy I totally aggree with the plot holes with the elements I can't wait for chapter 3 now is he going to sign the toad contract or a different one

Hello. I am MasterJester. I ,also, am new at this. I read many books and manga of all sorts so I can tell what is worth all the hours of time spent. I personally believe that you have talent and that you should keep going with this one for now. Good luck.

I like it so far and I'm definitely excited to see the story develop. I like the idea of Naruto being a wind god lol especially if it causes mass carnage.

Omg awesome idea premise and my favorite pairing I can't wait for more keep it up

It's a good start. Keep going!

I'm surprised to see that you're finally writing fanfictions!

This has potential, though you should know that "tsu" is one letter in japanese, so Kyuubi's nickname would be "Natsu-chan".