Reviews for Kick
LostTr4veler chapter 1 . 4/24
Holy carp a Blue Sky 2?! Yes please!
asdfghjkl chapter 1 . 11/10/2022
THIS IS ADORABLE! Just finished "Blue Sky" for the first time, and I loved it! THis is so lovely and in-character.
One percent chapter 1 . 10/9/2022
Wheatley has the super power of making his monologues seem like a proper, lively, heart-warming conversation. I love the way you write him. He's adorable and will be a great dad.
Btw, the part about always listening to Chell was just too wholesome. I'm melting.
Thank you for this!
You are an increadible author.
Just in case you wrote actual books, please let me know, I'd buy them in a heartbeat. Your writing is life!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2021
This is such a precious monologue. The description is right; the fluffiness is real.
TheExistentialBread chapter 1 . 4/17/2020
is rambling sorry I posted too early
TheExistentialBread chapter 1 . 4/17/2020
I like how the baby kicks Wheatley when he
seajong115 chapter 1 . 1/24/2020

PhoenixFantastic chapter 1 . 2/6/2019
Too cute! Oh, this is too cute. I'm dying of cuteness. Wheatley's going to be a great Dad, I just know it.
The only way this could be better is if you could write a short bonus chapter that shows Wheatley and Chell holding their baby for the first time. I know this story is kinda old, so it's just an idea (that I would totally adore if you could do it).

Thanks for writing!
Kim chapter 1 . 11/25/2018
Oh this is amazing! You should be an author, I'd read all your books! Could you do anymore portal?
Lucy chapter 1 . 9/29/2018
I cannot state with words how much I love this ficlet. It's so sweet and beautiful. Not only is it Chelley but it's them having a kid! This is so calm and quiet and sweet and yet just so wonderfully funny. Just incredible. Thank you so so much for writing this amazing, beautiful, stellar fic!
User724 chapter 1 . 9/26/2018
"I did that, me"
Nice throwback there
User724 chapter 1 . 9/26/2018
Any thoughts on what the baby looks like?
for some reason I imagine her as Melody from The Little Mermaid 2, probably because of the whole "Human-Newly human Romance" thing. I've written 2 stories featuring this baby, hope you don't mind.
imsherlockedx chapter 1 . 1/10/2018
this made me smile
detectivejigsaw chapter 1 . 1/6/2018
*Proceeding with melting into puddle of goo operation*
My favorite part of your Portal fanfics is how well you keep Wheatley in character.
I mean, I haven't actually played Portal 2, but from what I can tell you are excellent. And I love how he sings a lullaby to quiet the baby at the end (or at least stop it kicking).
Good job.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2017
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