Reviews for Don't Hide
sweetysm chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
I really enjoyed the story, it flowed nicely. I think ten years were a bit too much, but it fit well with the story! :)
Karatekid-Ninja chapter 12 . 12/12/2014
i really enjoyed this, i think the flow between first and second chapter needs work as well as the flow between 11th and 12th but all in all i liked it
CupCakeyyy chapter 12 . 11/17/2014
Awww, I love them! Sequel? Please?
anotherboarduser chapter 12 . 10/2/2014
I like this story, I think it is well written.

But I think Harry's behavior can be explained by the brainwashing, indoctrination, abuse... he was trapped in by Dumbledore and other purebloods. Harry was set to think a certain I am not good except in a cannon fodder way to die (and it is die, Voldemort can use a cutting curse on Harry's head).

As for the amount of times Ron tried to break them up, I think that say pretty much everything about whether or not they really "owe" Ron for being their "good friend".

I think you should write a sequel, even a short one, to say what would the others reactions be.

It would make the story so much better. Although ending at this point is a good place to stop too. It's just my opinion that a bit more and the end would be better.

anotherboarduser chapter 11 . 10/2/2014
Nice, I like how Hermione really reject Ron.
anotherboarduser chapter 2 . 10/2/2014
Nice description.
anotherboarduser chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
Nice start
Starzinmieyez chapter 12 . 10/1/2014
Awww! :'D this was so cute! It's good to see an update :')
Kaya chapter 9 . 7/13/2013
lyaser53 chapter 11 . 6/17/2013
Well It's time to let the world Know ITS REALLY HARRY AND HERMIONE
lyaser53 chapter 7 . 6/17/2013
You did very well...Hermione and Ron just never really worked at all...If it were not for Harry I don't see them even being friends.
lyaser53 chapter 4 . 6/17/2013
How can she not realize he just told her he was in love with her?
Emily chapter 11 . 6/5/2013
I like it! Keep going!
Man of Constant Sorrow chapter 11 . 6/6/2013
Well I just finished reading chapters 1-11 and I must say that this is quite a wonderful retelling of Canon, giving the Harry and Hermione the significant other they deserve, a great wizard deserves the brightest witch.

I hope you find the motivation to not only finish but to write something new as well, you are a brilliant writer with amazing ideas, It would be a shame if this was the last contribution you made to the genre.

Thank you for sharing, I eagerly await your next. favorited
pawsrule chapter 11 . 6/5/2013
Wonderful! Glad you didn't rehash all the battle. Nicely written. Sad it is almost over but am looking forward to more.
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