Reviews for Show Me How to Move
CrazySivan chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
Magical. Wonderful. Breath-taking.
Thank you for sharing this!
SBNYC09 chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Such a great story I love how the story went back and forth between Snow and Emma's pregnancies
mcobsessed007 chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
This was wonderful. I wonder if those are the thought processes Emma and Snow really went through?
ice23hot chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
This story left me crying. You are such a talented writer. I LOVED THIS.
ElvenCompanion chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Still working my way through all your HG & OUaT stories. Really loved this one, showing how they are mirroring each other, but still take the on the challenge of pregnancy and become a mother in such different ways. Really loved it.

Keep writing. :)
MissUpland11 chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
PLEASE write more Snow/Charming! There isn't enough, and you are the best at it! I'm begging you!
Witchy-grrl chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
Oh MAN, the parallel structure of this story just shattered my heart. Snow's progression was beautifully done, and GOD I wanted to hug Emma so badly! LOVE THIS!
Shanna chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
this was beautiful! i hope u write more snow/charming :)
KateToast chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
Wow. That was absolutely gorgeous, and totally fits in to what's happened on the show so far. I'm going to consider this story to be the events leading up to Emma's and Henry's births. So, so wonderful, such a pleasure to read, especially as the characters were so spot-on. I can't wait to see more from you.
Annie chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
;_; I feel so sad. It feels so real, y'know? All of the worries of being a mother, all of the sadness that comes with giving it up, and all of the choices you never hear about if you're the kid who got abandoned. Life is hard. Even fairy tale life is hard. ;_; Again, I look forward to reading more from you.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Now if only the actual show carried the eloquence that your telling did. Truly touching and had me tearing up from the half way point. Beautiful.
Haley Renee chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
I cried at the very depressingly beautiful. And I loved how you kept everything close to canon as possible (like not mentioning Henry's father's name).
Happy Endings for All chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
Great story! Loved the song choice. I liked that you paralleled the stories of the two mothers who had to give up their children. The interactions between Snow and James were so sweet. Nice job, thanks for sharing!
Blue chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
Simply wonderful, love the intercutting between Snow and Emma's pregnancies. The progression from elation to fear for their fates is heartbreaking. Kudos on how you've written James, Snow and Emma, the characterizations were spot on.
KTxx chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
This is so good! I love the little parallels of Emma and Snow's pregnancy's. I just love how everything fit together and the Snow/Charming was adorable. Great fic!
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