|Reviews for Story Removed|
| DarkEcoFreak chapter 9 . 10/16/2012
Please finish this. It's very very good!
| natory'sZone chapter 9 . 4/10/2012
*claps* this is awesome :D
| icefox94 chapter 8 . 3/24/2012
if this is a matrix crossover, you need to put this in the jak and daxter/matrix crossover category. it will just confuse and frustrate people who haven't watched it to start reading a story they think they will understand and get into it when all these matrix things they don't understand starts to happen. i've stopped reading stories for that reason. other than that, i think it's good so far. maybe some actual experiments on daxter that give him back his real body would be nice? maybe gain the ability to go back in forth between ottsel and elf kinda like jak does with his dark self.
| Daross chapter 8 . 12/13/2011
ha i'm reviewing my own story, can I do that? i'm really actually just board and well figured what the hell.
| xonic chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
good writeing person, i'd like a better plot on the next chapters though
| SoulNinjas chapter 4 . 12/5/2011
Interesting but alittle warning before you went into flashback mode would have been nice. I like how you got him to meet with Ashlein and Torn in the chap.
| SoulNinjas chapter 2 . 12/3/2011
Curious and ready to see how this story will turn out.