|Reviews for Love's Last Bite|
| mum2shane chapter 18 . 12/25/2013
please finish this story
| athenawisdom17 chapter 18 . 7/11/2013
comeon keep going... Update faster.
| Veronica chapter 17 . 6/19/2013
Please oh please! Write more! I'm about to die if I don't find out what's going to happen next. I hope Winsey is okay! Where are the guys!? Oh my gosh I hope Davide/Daniel gets his ass kick. I'm about sick of him. ): Please write more soon.
Your #1 Fan Veronica :)
| alistarsmusic chapter 18 . 6/19/2013
Thank you for the shout out! I'm happy I help motivate you to write more for this story! :]
And please tell me that Winsey just passed out and didn't actually die because even if she tried to kill Alana in Elena's body I still think she's kick-ass! I wonder what's going to happen next? I think there's going to be more action since I'm pretty sure Daniel's going to try to keep up with his promise to Alana. He's going to try to kill Elena so Alana can have her body but I think Arsenio is going to stop him. I would think Winsey would help too but she's so badly hurt I don't think she has a chance. Please update soon! n_n
| alistarsmusic chapter 17 . 2/18/2013
If I remember correctly, Elena told Winsey about Alana trying to take over her body and if I'm correct than that might be the reason why Winsey didn't start freaking out about Elena falling to her knees but instead calmly holding her so she wouldn't hurt herself. Winsey is truly a good friend. I wonder what Winsey will do though? I don't know if she has a solution for what Elena is going through but I kind of hope she does. And they guys! I still don't trust Daniel. Especially the way he was acting...he's totally faking it. Why can't Elena see that though? I bet Daniel's going to be happy Alana's back though...and Arsenio...I feel so bad for him. He gets the end of the stick from Elena (meaning, he doesn't get as much feelings from her as she gives Daniel). Can't wait to read more!
| yusagi710 chapter 16 . 2/7/2013
Amazing story. It’s midnight and i’m reading it. Update soon X3
| foxface333ChocolateLabrador chapter 16 . 2/4/2013
Oh My Gosh I just read this fanfic and I love it! It's so well written, I honestly can't wait to read more!
| alistarsmusic chapter 16 . 2/2/2013
Thank you for the very long chapter! But I'm still confused why Elena can't comprehend that Arsenio is still the best guy suited for her. Seriously! I would choose him ten times over Daniel. And I'm glad you introduced a new character in this chapter because Winsey seems like someone who's very intuitive and intelligent. I wonder what she'll think of both guys when she meets them? Although I hope her advice from before doesn't change. I really hope she pushes for Elena to choose Arsenio. Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please! n_n
| Avery Collins chapter 16 . 2/1/2013
I swear, if she chooses Daniel...
Can't she see what's plainly in front of her eyes? Arsenio is the guy. He's her guy!
| FaItH601z chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
i love ur story
| Siabhan chapter 15 . 1/2/2013
great stry , but it's really fustr8ng how shes bck and forth between the 2 guys , she needs 2 make up her damn mind hahaha
| Avery Collins chapter 15 . 10/14/2012
No, no, no ,no, no! Has Elena completely lost her mind? How can she be so completely blind? Daniel is such a jerk and Arsenio is such a sweetheart. Open your eyes, Elena
| MissNerdyGirl12 chapter 15 . 9/14/2012
I love this storyyyy! Please update soon! I am in love with Arsenio/Emil's character!
| alistarsmusic chapter 15 . 9/9/2012
Nooo! Why can't Elena get over Daniel?! She has Arsenio now...Hell I'd choose Arsenio over Daniel any day. And she told him she loved him! And she still feels guilty about Daniel catching him?! Ahh! I hope she gets over him soon! I don't think Daniel's the right guy for her. Especially if she felt such powerful sparks with Arsenio. I think their soul mates...I can't wait to read more! So please update soon!
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/8/2012
Please make an actuall book because this is so good