Reviews for Without Kevin
Marf chapter 5 . 3/25
Your dilemma of transportation can be solved by having ben turn into his high intelligence aliens and building something like knight rider. Or by creating robot using id mask something like r2-d2. Or by simple introducing ship or something similar earlier. I must say i like it and would like to see more chapters.
marf chapter 5 . 3/25
You can turn ben into brainstorm or upgrade or grey matter and měke them new ride with AI or something like that. They god the jet so you can use brainpower guy to figure out a way for ben to earn money and buy old plane or heli for example but i am sure something like Knight rider is possible for him to make and you can use the AI as third make in mobile like R2-D2. It would have small inpakt in point of insertion but over all it wouldn't be disruptive to overall story. The AI cold be like ship or ship.
Bookeater-otaku chapter 5 . 10/19/2014
I like your take on this story. I would like to see it continued.
warprince2000 chapter 5 . 10/15/2014
Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)
JoseLuises chapter 5 . 9/21/2014
Vamos pon el otro capitulo, quiero ver como continua.
badkidoh chapter 5 . 9/7/2014
great chapter
car54 chapter 5 . 9/5/2014
Great continuation. looking forward to more.
DragonRose0 chapter 4 . 4/11/2014
will there be more?
it's a good start
KarinNarutayu chapter 4 . 10/12/2012
Update soon.
KarinNarutayu chapter 3 . 10/12/2012
Nice chapter . Update soon
KarinNarutayu chapter 2 . 10/12/2012
Update soon pls
KarinNarutayu chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
Update soon
ZanaZ chapter 4 . 4/3/2012
I'm loving this story so far. I would have preferred a Kevin-less show by far. The chemistry between Ben and Gwen is just to good. Only real critic I have is that I'd like a few more hints of them 'like liking' each other, even if it's just a teeny bit. Anyway, good job so far. )
FanficFemale chapter 4 . 3/25/2012
Loved the chapter and the way you cover up the obvious plot holes and such. Can't wait for the next chapter!
bennet001 chapter 4 . 3/24/2012
Truely original this story has developed nicely and the plot is way better then alien force in respect that you fill the loop in which Kevin turns better vigilante on the drop of a hat and shows that Ben actually trains with his aliens and not just wings it as he goes along update soon kyubbi
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