Reviews for Invincible
Crystalzap chapter 1 . 2/27
heh... well I don't think Merlin would explode him, kind of anticlimactic. Oh well poor Merlin, his jobs is getting boring... maybe he needs a hobby? Dragon riding? XD
IWouldGetUpButNah chapter 1 . 11/7/2017
awsome. I hate it when I read something where Merlin is so... useless, ya know? its annoying, but this is great and I really like the creativity putting into Harold. wonderful fic
Guest chapter 1 . 5/23/2017
I like how merlin makes it sound like a nightly occurrence, just: the last guy ran away screaming. He's not even surprised.
YokaiAngel chapter 1 . 2/25/2017
NeverTooMuchInspiration chapter 1 . 1/8/2017
Nicely written, and perhaps a more likely scenario than it might seem from the canon given how broken the magic potentially could be (and always tends to be). Perhaps also a good point about the importance in the series of magic being illegal and Merlin using it only with extreme caution. Otherwise, every episode would probably be kind of like this but perhaps even shorter. Thank you for writing and posting!
MythologyStar chapter 1 . 10/25/2016
Haha! Merlin seems to be more indignant about the fact that he has to clean the floor several times during the night, and not about the fact that Arthur almost got assasinated! Perhaps he's used to attempts like these?
Aviendha Aviendha Aviendha chapter 1 . 9/22/2016
Nice story.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2016
Wow Merlin wow...
Aaronna chapter 1 . 5/28/2016
I love this story more every time I read it...
WriterGreenReads chapter 1 . 1/10/2016
That ending was a little unexpected... Oh well, I still thought it was hilarious.
SkylarO chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
This is fantastic! I think you should add a BAMF tag to it though.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 1 . 12/15/2015
Merlin's eyes glowed gold. Harold exploded.

Huh, that was rather darker than where I thought that was going. ..still funny though.
XxPurpleAngelOfAnarchyxX chapter 1 . 12/10/2015
Omg, im crying! What the hell did i just read! 3 XD

ameliemallette1 chapter 1 . 11/10/2015
Angel-Sue76 chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
*falls about laughing* prat, destiny and all that was bad enough and then you had to end it with him cleaning the floor again.

This was so hilarious I loved every word. Ah a black cloak and then the magic secret passage hee hee. Perhaps in every cloak is a secret passage map hee hee.
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