Reviews for Invincible
Aaronna chapter 1 . 5/28
I love this story more every time I read it...
WriterGreenReads chapter 1 . 1/10
That ending was a little unexpected... Oh well, I still thought it was hilarious.
SkylarO chapter 1 . 1/4
This is fantastic! I think you should add a BAMF tag to it though.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 1 . 12/15/2015
Merlin's eyes glowed gold. Harold exploded.

Huh, that was rather darker than where I thought that was going. ..still funny though.
XxPurpleAngelOfAnarchyxX chapter 1 . 12/10/2015
Omg, im crying! What the hell did i just read! 3 XD

ameliemallette1 chapter 1 . 11/10/2015
Angel-Sue76 chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
*falls about laughing* prat, destiny and all that was bad enough and then you had to end it with him cleaning the floor again.

This was so hilarious I loved every word. Ah a black cloak and then the magic secret passage hee hee. Perhaps in every cloak is a secret passage map hee hee.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2015
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Aurora02 chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
OMG I absolutely do love this story!
Scififan33 chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
Poor bored Merlin
Angelic Phantomcrow chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
Hihi! Quite funny enough
But was the explosion of a human in the end necessary?
That's such a mess and maybe a bit out of Merlin's character...I think...
At least a good laugh
Guest chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
So perfect just amaze balls! The last line was just right.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
that was brilliant!
cindy4651 chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
Nice, thanks!
LinBates chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Hehehe hahaha hehehe! Very good!
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