Reviews for My First Kiss
unfaithfullchild chapter 1 . 4/4
****/5 Very amusing indeed. Pick it up. Put it down. Satisfied. Good one-shot. Not OOC in my opinion. Guess that wraps it up.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Omg is all I could say and that is still a understatement lol that was good
Poisoned Dark Angel chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
D I HAVE NOT LAUGHED LIKE THIS IN THE LONGEST! Great story but there is so much potential. I would love to know how Trunks managed to explain to his father that he kissed and ass groped his little sister as well Gotens first time watching porn! Overall it was awesome! Continue writing for laughs!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
haha not what I was expecting in a good way though. Very enjoyable :D
V-ChanUzumakiLSSJ chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
DemonFiccer chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
This was hilarious. Forget the CEO Trunks, I imagined the future swordsman Trunks during this. The last two lines were priceless. God knows it takes a lot to make Trunks sob like a baby. Sorry, but Bra's a bitch for doing that. I'm figuratively placing my hand on Trunks' shoulder right now.
Thunder-Rose1 chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
i've never laughed so hard in my entire life, that was amazingly funny
Raina1 chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
Why would anyone flame this? It IS funny. The ending is hilarious and the reactions of Trunks and Bra to what happened are laugh out loud comedy: just as you intended. The scene with Vegeta was PRICELESS. XD
Trunksmybaby chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
this was too cute! even tho it had incest.. omg..too funny! you outdid yourself!
XDarkAngelOfLoveX chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
Omg! ROFL! I'm I think I'm gonna die! XDDD This was soooo freakin funny! Can't wait for the next story!
TFSrules chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
Too damn funny! Thought that I was going to pass my drink

through my nose...really ;-)

Goten is so sweet; he and Bra are made for each other. But, I

have to wonder, what Vegetas reaction was...hahaha!
Raven Shinobi chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
LOL! Poor Trunks, and I feel bad for Bra for having her first kiss project go wrong. At least she had Goten to immediately remedy it, Trunks on the other hand didn't receive much consolation and will be scarred for life.

I would've loved more description here and there to make the transition between every scene and the next feel a bit smoother, but this is just me nitpicking. Overall, an entertaining fic with engaging dialogues, and I really enjoyed your humorous portrayal of the three Half-Saiyans :)