|Reviews for GhostHunters|
| deepfathom chapter 7 . 8/2/2012
Hey, good job! But there are a few typos here and there. You may especially want to take a look at this line in particular:
"And with that he pooped the cork on the vial."
| deepfathom chapter 6 . 7/5/2012
yay! a new chapter! I was just thinking the other day that I hadn't seen any updates on this one for a while :)
| ThePowerOfFriendship chapter 5 . 4/6/2012
Why am I now associating Ray with Hagrid lol?
| deepfathom chapter 5 . 4/5/2012
Oo! An update! I was so excited to see the notification in my inbox that I read it immediately.
Love this! Keep it up :D
| IAmTheRedLady chapter 4 . 3/31/2012
I like it, I like it. Very interesting concept. And ha ha, Ray talks like Hagrid!
| Hypsidium chapter 4 . 1/24/2012
Oh my gosh, oh my gosh! I did NOT call any of that. Loving this so much so far! I hope we get to see Janine too, haha!
| deepfathom chapter 4 . 1/24/2012
You're a great writer. This story is very imaginative and original :)
Keep it up!
| deepfathom chapter 3 . 12/14/2011
I'm glad you got the next chapter up! Good job on it.
One question though: in the story description, you said this takes place in 17th century London, but the date on the prologue says 1890. I was a little confused because 17th century would mean the 1600's, not the 1800's. 1800's would be the 19th century.
You might want to think about changing that if you can. :)
| deepfathom chapter 2 . 12/5/2011
Interesting perspective! Curious to see where this is going.
One little suggestion: Try seperating the dialogue into different paragraphs. It's a little confusing to know who's saying what.
Good job, though :)