Reviews for Pretenders to the Throne
jk chapter 21 . 9/13
how does Edward lying about killing a man get him out of the tower? he cant prove that he killed someone, or that that someone was sent by his uncles, and even still that does not prove that he did not hire Victoria to kill the queen...just saying
all it proves is that hes a fucking liar hes either lying now or he was lying then.
your story has HOLES
like they would say "hit it off" back then and their the queen and king of what? their in America? aro rules over new York? wtf?
jk chapter 7 . 9/13
why did Edward only send one of his whores off? what about the milk maid? and I'm sure there were plenty of others since the first we read about him he was with two in the same day...shit I bet he has kids!
jk chapter 3 . 9/13
shes making a man she doesn't know king cause she has alittle crush? god shes soooo stupid! if she was inclined his way she should have sent someone she trusts to his house to interview his staff...see what hes really like
and she should have sent her maids to test him...she should have tested him when he went to the market...she has no idea what a skanky back stabber shes getting...and omg tanyas a maid! edwhores gonna be all over that...ewww
jk chapter 1 . 9/13
Edwards a whore! why in the hell would you want him with bella?/
god I'm so sick of these stories wheres hes a dirty skank and bellas a virgin...he doesn't deserve her! plain and simple give bella a good guy not a nasty used up whore
lola74 chapter 46 . 4/28
I just finished reading this... great story...:)
shaz308 chapter 11 . 5/12/2014
Glad Alice was safe and well.
shaz308 chapter 10 . 5/12/2014
This can't be good, surely!
shaz308 chapter 9 . 5/12/2014
Well that should keep his uncles happy for a while.
shaz308 chapter 8 . 5/12/2014
Interesting honeymoon for a queen and her Kung.
shaz308 chapter 7 . 5/4/2014
Glad to see them working through their issues quickly. I still don't trust the uncles though and Edward needs to come clean to his queen. His discussion with his uncle smacked a little of treason kneeing easy te knows of his uncle's past intentions.
shaz308 chapter 6 . 5/4/2014
Glad tats over. I still fear that his uncle will cause Edward to have his loyalty to Bella questioned. Looking forward to reading more, thanks.
shaz308 chapter 5 . 5/4/2014
I'm hoping it is Edward. Looking forward to them being reunited.
shaz308 chapter 4 . 5/4/2014
Looks like she is picking her inner circle. I hope Edward can be trusted.
shaz308 chapter 3 . 5/4/2014
Looks like Edward has managed to secure his queen. His uncles with be happy. Jacob will be livid.
shaz308 chapter 2 . 5/4/2014
Certainly knows where to position himself to attract her attention. His uncles are going to be a problem.
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