|Reviews for Day and Night|
| MonkeyButt chapter 1 . 7/25
Wonderfully delicious tense atmosphere! Loved how possessive Marshall was in the beginning, And the short teasing flashbacks. That cliff hanger at the end was a perfect way to leave us wanting more. As much as I'd like more, I feel like this piece could actually stand alone should you not want to. Wonderful job!
| Opal chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
So what happens next?
| TiTheSpiderQueen chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
Such a cute poem at the end and such a cute story
| Chriss-Meister chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Wow, this short story is awesome! I love the concept**
| bwmimi1 chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
| Ashe Jayfeather chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
Me likey! I love this.
| 99Roosters chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Omg this is awesome
| Gravity. What Gravity chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Hehe, this is awesome:3 I love the idea that Marshall Lee would want to brag, but refrain from it because of Fionna. Brilliant!:D
| Momo chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
LOVE IT GIRL! YOU SO CRA CRA! (;
| If Only Misha Were Mine chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
omg lolzzz, i can 100% see Marshall being such a
"bad little boy..." (haha c what i did there!? *corny joke)
anyways! this was a very seductive story... i'd love to see this progress in like one-shots or something that would be awesome! 3 3 3ed it!
| marshall lee neko chan chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
lol bubba got jelly this neko is happy love the poem btw
| RandomFandom chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
So, I know you finished this over a year ago, but this would be pretty fun to read if you ever added on to it. Just... ya know, letting ya know.. Hint hint wink wink. But seriously though. Awesome.
| BlueMockingJayBird chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
har har gumball is clueless
| whitealmond chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
I love Fiolee, but you made me feel bad for Gumball in this XD this was a really enjoyable read, loved it!
| Cheyenne chapter 1 . 8/17/2012