Reviews for Rapid Eye Movement
Starship Artisan chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
Hahaha this was cute, nice work!
Tenebras Lux chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
tee hee :)

Love the way you write~~~ Love this, love that. Love the story in general; it's perfect! It's 愛!~

Ahem. Ah, yes. More or less back to the point... Shauntal's character seems very well developed and it was written very... well, well. Nicely. Smoothly. Whatever ya wanna say. I have a great idea of her personality, and I understand her. I think. Hope. Whatever. Anyhow, I love how it's been written in third person. 愛!~

~Breezy
chandelure chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME, GODS OF WRITING? WHY DO YOU MAKE ME SUCH A BAD WRITER /cries forever

ahem. as you may have, um, guessed, i adore this. and this couple. and everything about this piece. I JUST LOVE IT. i'm flailing like a fangirl rn.

anyway~ wonderful job, though i'm sure you already know that~
air lock chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
Hi there! I found this randomly, and I mostly review only for the fics that I like, so...

It's a well-written piece, just how a light-hearted first meeting should be between the two should be. The writer in Shauntal is portrayed nicely as well as Grimsley's musing and everything else.

Plus, your grammar is awesome.

( & Sorry for the idiotic review. Heh.)

-air lock