|Reviews for The Lists|
| Guest chapter 44 . 7/21
I love your story and the characters but the best part about it is the witty comments Bella makes through the whole thing there were very few chapters where I didn't laugh out loud every 3 lines or so!
| Ashafree chapter 44 . 12/30/2016
so I simply devoured this story. I came across it by complete accident and i don't regret it. thank you for writing an actually story, you know if you changed their names it wouldn't even resemble twilight. it was very good.
| KatelinSalLovesReading1 chapter 44 . 2/3/2016
I love it.
| ash chapter 19 . 1/30/2016
GOD i am so jealous of her. she is like the opposite of me. everything id want to be. ugh...and has great friends and sexy bf...damn
| amandavalensi chapter 43 . 1/17/2016
Absolutely loved this fic! Couldn't put my phone down while reading it. Thank you.
| Nicoconsd chapter 44 . 12/26/2015
Thanks for the great journey! I love Jasper stories and I was so excited to read this when I found it! Happy Holidays! :)
| ILoveAnime89 chapter 44 . 9/10/2015
I love this story found it via The Non-Cannon Awards on WP so glad I did.
| XmariskaX chapter 44 . 4/1/2015
| lolie.vond chapter 1 . 2/17/2015
I'm so jealous of you. I can't believe you meet Jackson. I mean, I would give everything to just say ''Hi'' to him. Just to make he knows that I exist. I really love him! But, unfortunately, I live in Brazil, so... :(( btw, loving the stor 3
| Calyptra chapter 44 . 11/3/2014
I liked it very much. I like that it was realistic. So many writers tend to write all about romance. No problems, "I love you"s after the first day. You described the hurdles, the sacrifices, the fights and differences. You showed how everyone of us in some point of their life think they know what they want, but they don't. Also that sometimes the timing is pour, that one needs to grow up to make a relationship work. And also that a "bad boy" isn't necessarily some ultimate criminal who will break your heart. I can also bee a person who has been through a lot and is realizing that he needs to change if he wants to keep the good things in his life. Not the stupid teenage-girl-version, where the girl forcefully changes him. (And to be honest, who doesn't want the combination of good man and bad boy? The one the calls you babe, but also helps pay the bills)
It is well written and I enjoyed every chapter. What I missed is the part where Bella tells Jasper about hes problems that led to be so close to the Cullens, and where he tells her his whole story. It would have loved to see the reactions.
Too bad we didn't get some of Jasper's point of view. He is the troubled soul after all.
You, my friend created a wonderful Peter. I adore him. I want to create him artificially just the way you described him, so I can keep him. As I don't want him to get lonely, I will have to create Jas as well. With tats, piercings and all (I can so imaging Jackson, whom I picture as Jasper - only taller - to rock this description)
I must say at this very moment you have made my top 3 of Jasper/Bella stories. (I kind of prefer the human versions anyway.)
Keep up the good job with future stories!
| Sandra46 chapter 44 . 10/23/2014
| sam's-lurker-droid chapter 44 . 8/4/2014
I really enjoyed your story! Thank you for everything you put into it!
| d chapter 44 . 7/25/2014
Aww yay! Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. I loved it!
| d chapter 42 . 7/25/2014
Aww how sweet! Seth is the reserved one.
| d chapter 33 . 7/23/2014
You know I can't believe how some people can be so rude with their comments. I'm glad u set that person straight. Its not like u get paid to write fanfiction, these people need to just chill out. But I am sorry to had to go thru that. God bless u and ur family.