Reviews for The Ultimate Dojutsu |
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![]() ![]() When you bag your best friends mom |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you return to this fic it’s really good |
![]() ![]() Hala me permitirá subir está historia a Youtube dándote el respectivo crédito |
![]() ![]() Love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hold up KG. Your arms were your punishment for not helping the homie when Kyubi-chan (or as I like to call her Nabiki) had the whip. Now you set yourself up for another one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() am i the only one grossed out by him being paired with his dog, its way different they kyubi. kyubi is a chakra entity given form and sentience, kasumi is a ninken using henge, its really hard to keep listening to it cause of that for me |
![]() ![]() ![]() i am glad KG that you are continuing your stories. let your wife know it is greatly appreciated. this site is free and you don't need to even write but you do anyway. can't wait until the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweatdroping smirking brat. Author, buy vocabulary. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What does punctuality have to do with it? Maybe the author meant a sense of tact? It’s bad when people use words without knowing their meaning, but for a writer it’s shameful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The "Kit" fing is F unnoing. |
![]() ![]() Tsume is like 20 years older than Naruto and you have her romancing a Naruto who's not even 12, this is a p*do fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() these people swallowing soldier pills like their candy |
![]() ![]() ![]() dude needs to stop smirking "Naruto smirked at Kasumi" "Naruto smirked as he remembered..." "Naruto smirked at the thought... dear God dude run this shit through Chatgpt if you can't change it yourself |
![]() ![]() ![]() bestiality warning |
![]() ![]() ![]() nnnnn |