|Reviews for Marriage by Entail|
| Lilli chapter 23 . 9/18
Love the Story
| Helios7406 chapter 8 . 9/30/2020
For someone so clever Mary can be such an idiot, even if Pamuk had been all that she believed he was carrying on like that was beyond inappropriate.
| Icy eyed Angel chapter 23 . 10/2/2019
I really liked your story :) hope you will post a sequel, because the ending was a bit sudden
| ClaireR89 chapter 18 . 9/17/2019
Well written just too slow/ too short chapters. Either way it balances out to slow pace
| ClaireR89 chapter 13 . 9/17/2019
Wooo more angst and forced drama
| ClaireR89 chapter 6 . 9/17/2019
If you werent overdoing their personalities it'd be more enjoyable
| ClaireR89 chapter 1 . 9/17/2019
Jedediah? Of all the names of have guess for an OC this wasn't even close XD
| Fritzie193 chapter 23 . 8/9/2018
This is such a wonderful story! Love it! Thank you for sharing this!
| Guest chapter 23 . 7/30/2017
What?! You can't end it here ! What don't you write the 2nd season ? It would be so great! I really love your story
| stacey caitlin chapter 23 . 2/27/2017
What an awesome story. And very beautifully written. You brought to life one of my favorite plots ever: that of Matthew slowly and ever so patiently winning Mary's love. I love how you portrayed the two of them in your story.
Matthew with his patience, understanding and devotion. I love that refuses to compromise his principles just because he is desperate to win her love. He is steadfast and true. The perfect gentleman, the brilliant lawyer, the obedient son, the sensitive friend, the vulnerable and entirely smitten husband.
The way you wrote Mary was brilliant. You highlighted her insecurities, fears and frustrations, but you did so without alienating the reader. Instead, you made her vulnerable and solicited a genuine sympathy for her. The way she embraces Matthew's influence (albeit hesitantly and definitely secretly at first) and eventually sheds her immaturity and pride is just so beautifully done.
They go through so many obstacles, so many push-and-pulls. All these delays made a perfectly agonizing slow burn... but oh, it was incredibly gratifying in the end.
I also appreciate getting both of their points of view. The dialogues and monologues are awesome.
Thank you so very much for taking the time to write this story. I know it has been several years, but I want you to know that it is still very much appreciated.
| Ssnqrq chapter 23 . 6/8/2015
I re read your story one more time and found it still brilliant as the first time I saw it. It's great if you have time for a sequel because this story deserves that!
| ShippingMaryandMatthewForever chapter 23 . 1/24/2015
Hello, I thought I would re read this story and wondered if you had thought of writing some more to the story. This story is great and I quite like it so I hope you do continue with it. :)
| Renn chapter 23 . 8/26/2014
This story was brilliant. Thank you very much for writing it
| Lady Isabelle Black chapter 22 . 4/15/2014
please write a sequel to this story
| Lady Isabelle Black chapter 23 . 4/15/2014
love this story