Reviews for Marriage by Entail |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I always thought it was strange that no one brought up that Mary certainly can't be the only woman he had done that to, Matthew should have put his foot down, preferably down Kemals' throat. |
![]() ![]() Love the Story Reallyy |
![]() ![]() ![]() For someone so clever Mary can be such an idiot, even if Pamuk had been all that she believed he was carrying on like that was beyond inappropriate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked your story :) hope you will post a sequel, because the ending was a bit sudden |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well written just too slow/ too short chapters. Either way it balances out to slow pace |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wooo more angst and forced drama |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you werent overdoing their personalities it'd be more enjoyable |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jedediah? Of all the names of have guess for an OC this wasn't even close XD |
![]() ![]() This is such a wonderful story! Love it! Thank you for sharing this! |
![]() ![]() What?! You can't end it here ! What don't you write the 2nd season ? It would be so great! I really love your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an awesome story. And very beautifully written. You brought to life one of my favorite plots ever: that of Matthew slowly and ever so patiently winning Mary's love. I love how you portrayed the two of them in your story. Matthew with his patience, understanding and devotion. I love that refuses to compromise his principles just because he is desperate to win her love. He is steadfast and true. The perfect gentleman, the brilliant lawyer, the obedient son, the sensitive friend, the vulnerable and entirely smitten husband. The way you wrote Mary was brilliant. You highlighted her insecurities, fears and frustrations, but you did so without alienating the reader. Instead, you made her vulnerable and solicited a genuine sympathy for her. The way she embraces Matthew's influence (albeit hesitantly and definitely secretly at first) and eventually sheds her immaturity and pride is just so beautifully done. They go through so many obstacles, so many push-and-pulls. All these delays made a perfectly agonizing slow burn... but oh, it was incredibly gratifying in the end. I also appreciate getting both of their points of view. The dialogues and monologues are awesome. Thank you so very much for taking the time to write this story. I know it has been several years, but I want you to know that it is still very much appreciated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I re read your story one more time and found it still brilliant as the first time I saw it. It's great if you have time for a sequel because this story deserves that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, I thought I would re read this story and wondered if you had thought of writing some more to the story. This story is great and I quite like it so I hope you do continue with it. :) |
![]() ![]() This story was brilliant. Thank you very much for writing it |
![]() ![]() ![]() please write a sequel to this story |