|Reviews for Bad Luck and Trouble|
| Maria chapter 5 . 5/5
Brilliant story...I love stories with the kids in...
| Marian Simonetti chapter 5 . 5/3
I thought that I had read all the Steve and Danny
friendship stories but I hadn't read yours...it was
a little shorter than I like but I really enjoyed it..
I'm going to see if you've written any more like
| Marian Simonetti chapter 5 . 9/6/2020
Loved your story... .I live in Boston so needless to say I'm a Red Sox fan...Yankees suck...lol!
| Elise Deschat chapter 5 . 6/18/2019
Definitely different, both whumps, physical and mental...poor Danny, but on the bright side, things are looking up...
| Msdib chapter 5 . 3/31/2019
| Cubit2 chapter 5 . 7/12/2018
Wonderful fanfic with Danny whump, good characterizations, bromance and some awesome Daddy Danno.
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/18/2015
Loved it! Great story. Poor Danny.
| bananalumpia chapter 2 . 8/30/2015
Silly Danny...there's no snakes in Hawaii!
| detectivejiju chapter 5 . 8/20/2015
Beautiful written fanfiction... A trilled! Loved it...
| robinkristin chapter 5 . 6/1/2015
Beautiful Story !
| Long Live BRUCAS chapter 5 . 5/6/2015
great Danny hurt and of course Steve there to help
| LisaG16 chapter 5 . 5/2/2014
great story! excellent danny whumpage!
| avieryfriend chapter 5 . 4/19/2014
Thank you for an excellent story! This was one of the best ones I've read for a while, it had just the right amount of hurt and angst and team Ohana! I love the whole part in the cave and how Steve was able to take care of Danny and how he was rescued and the whole time when he was in the hospital the fear that he felt about losing control and not being able to find his daughter... not being able to help her and having to rely on Steve. I think you nailed his OCD perfectly and his ability to find a negative outcome in every situation! I like the way that Steve balances him out and how at the end he was ready to move forward with Steves and the teams help. Even though this story is only five chapters, you touched on everything so well and it was very complete and amazingly well done! Thank you because I thoroughly enjoyed it.
| Striped Leopard 626 chapter 5 . 11/18/2012
Very nicely done. For a moment I thought you were going to have Grace kidnapped, but I like what you did. Excellent idea. )
| tiggrr527 chapter 5 . 6/26/2012
I absolutely love the way you write the guys! And I always think its a bonus when Gracie is in the mix with the guys! Great job and thanks for sharing!