| Reviews for Bad Luck and Trouble |
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  Marian Simonetti chapter 5 . 10/17/2021 Loved your story...Steve and Danny will always be there for each other..the trust they have for each other is limitless...like the reference to the Red Sox as I live in Mass..I've also seen interviews with Scott and he said his Dad wanted him to be shortstop for the Yankees... Sorry I swore.. money into Grace's swear jar...KUDOS! |
| Maria chapter 5 . 5/5/2021 Brilliant story...I love stories with the kids in... |
| Marian Simonetti chapter 5 . 5/3/2021 I thought that I had read all the Steve and Danny friendship stories but I hadn't read yours...it was a little shorter than I like but I really enjoyed it.. I'm going to see if you've written any more like this..KUDOS... |
| Marian Simonetti chapter 5 . 9/6/2020 Loved your story... .I live in Boston so needless to say I'm a Red Sox fan...Yankees suck...lol! |
 Elise Deschat chapter 5 . 6/18/2019 Definitely different, both whumps, physical and mental...poor Danny, but on the bright side, things are looking up... |
| Msdib chapter 5 . 3/31/2019 Great story! |
| Cubit2 chapter 5 . 7/12/2018 Wonderful fanfic with Danny whump, good characterizations, bromance and some awesome Daddy Danno. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/18/2015 Loved it! Great story. Poor Danny. |
| bananalumpia chapter 2 . 8/30/2015 Silly Danny...there's no snakes in Hawaii! |
| detectivejiju chapter 5 . 8/20/2015 Beautiful written fanfiction... A trilled! Loved it... |
| robinkristin chapter 5 . 6/1/2015 Beautiful Story ! |
| Long Live BRUCAS chapter 5 . 5/6/2015 great Danny hurt and of course Steve there to help |
| LisaG16 chapter 5 . 5/2/2014 great story! excellent danny whumpage! |
| avieryfriend chapter 5 . 4/19/2014 Thank you for an excellent story! This was one of the best ones I've read for a while, it had just the right amount of hurt and angst and team Ohana! I love the whole part in the cave and how Steve was able to take care of Danny and how he was rescued and the whole time when he was in the hospital the fear that he felt about losing control and not being able to find his daughter... not being able to help her and having to rely on Steve. I think you nailed his OCD perfectly and his ability to find a negative outcome in every situation! I like the way that Steve balances him out and how at the end he was ready to move forward with Steves and the teams help. Even though this story is only five chapters, you touched on everything so well and it was very complete and amazingly well done! Thank you because I thoroughly enjoyed it. |
| Striped Leopard 626 chapter 5 . 11/18/2012 Very nicely done. For a moment I thought you were going to have Grace kidnapped, but I like what you did. Excellent idea. ) |