Reviews for Bad Luck and Trouble
BlueEyes444 chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
This is brilliant. D I'm in love. ;)

Eagerly looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Synbou chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
That was awesome! I loved the action and the whump. The little paragraph about Danny anticipating when Grace would no longer want to have his displays of affection really tug at my heart.
ackeberlynn chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Wow - that's a new way to torture Danny. Props to you. :P :P

When that bad guy slammed his foot down on Danny's trapped leg - yeah, wasn't expecting that. Could hardly imagine the pain.

You've put them in quite a bind here, and while I'm confident in Steve's ability to keep them alive, I'm anxiously looking forward to read more. Update soon!
LisaG16 chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
YEOWCH! That has to be extremely painful! Poor Danny! And I'm sure the teeth on that trap were not the cleanest thing in the world...I hope Danny is up on his tetanus shots!
JoaniexJony chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
I think Danny's right - he does have the worst luck!

Great start to the story hon, and my eyes were watering when he got his leg caught in that trap - Ouch!

At least he's there with Steve...

I'm lucky to have beta'd this, so I can tell the readers they are in for a treat! Its another cracking story from you hon - good job!

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